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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2022 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Surveying the Scene

A nice ode to Lovecraft.  But, you HAVE to pay better attention to the gender-based pronouns!  Too many cases of the girl being called "he." Unless you're ultimately planning to reveal that "she" is actually hermaphroditic.



Author's Response:

Oh jeeze I gotta go back and do some edits of some of these chapters, my autocorrect on word loves to slaughter sentence structure and pronouns in a way that seemingly eludes me. But no, I assume they're just word cutting the s off a she in this case. Pain in the ass, but meaning to go back and edit for sentence structure and errors like that again anyways so I guess it gives me a good reason. XD

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