Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2022 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great story Bunny. I love the different personalities for the prey, Matthew, Jack, Elliot, etc and all the predators, especially Lauren. She's a good villain - would be nice to see more strories with her in it. If I had one nitpick, I think things drug out just a bit too long between the last couple episodes with Elliot and then things felt just a bit rushed when he got eaten. Was hoping for a bit more dialogue between Emily, Lauren, Catherine and Elliot where it might look like he had the possibility of escape before he was eaten. These are very, very minor issues in a great story. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. As for the final scene, yeah that was a bit faster than the rest of the story as we were running head-long into the word limit. There's a fair chance Lauren turns up again in a future story. 

Reviewer: Idealworld Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2021 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story, and I love stories where sorority girls pick on younger guys, so this scenario was a godsend for me. You made me enjoy vore the way you write it, the passion and heat you get, the all the sensory stuff right. I love the characters as well; they all felt like real people, and that's hard to do when they're literally eating people. I love how the story diverges into subplots and the shifting perspective. I even loved your unbirthing scene, and I usually cringe at those. Amazing work, and you earned a new fan.  The only complaint is why you have to do my boy Matthew like that. The least he could have gotten was a blowjob; only kidding, fantastic job. 

Author's Response:

Thank you! And yeah I think sororities are the perfect candidates for tormenting boys to balance out all the lusting teenage boys do over sororities~

I'm happy to hear all the characters felt so real to you. It's always a challenge having such a large cast, as most characters don't have much screentime so to speak. I was a little worried it'd be difficult to follow along who was who etc. I tried to split it up though so readers only had to remember one or two people each act. 

And yeah poor Mathew lol. I thought it'd be such a dismissive way to treat him to have him eaten so swiftly, reinforcing the whole femdom angle of it. I'll be writing a few more F/M stories soon where preds take their time with their prey~