[Report This]Date: December 09 2022 5:40 AM Title: A Brand New World
Just asking but is there going to be a update to this series anytime soon in 2023, just wondering because I am curious how this story will end, been checking up on this series for a long while.
Date: April 30 2022 5:08 AM Title: A Brand New World
This story is amazing. I really hope this gets updated again, I can conpletely understand having no motivation for something anymore though.
Date: September 05 2021 5:09 AM Title: A Brand New World
I can definitely understand having a lack of motivation. Best of luck.
Date: September 03 2021 5:53 AM Title: A Brand New World
I really enjoy this story and wamted to know if there is a time estimate for the next chapters release
Author's Response:
Hi, thank you so much for reading! Now, I really want to apologize for the lack of an update. This past month and a half has been a mix of unexpected business, mental fatigue, and lack of motivation, which has made it really difficult for me to work on my stories. Things are still progressing, just slowly. I have by no means given up, though, and I really want to get an update posted soon! I'm hesitant to give a firm time estimate, just because I would hate to disappoint someone should I fail to meet it, but I really really hope to get things moving again within the next couple weeks. In the meantime, I'm very glad to hear that you're enjoying the series, and I really appreciate your patience while I'm figuring things out. Thanks again for reading, and I hope you enjoy what happens next!
-Pluto
Date: July 22 2021 1:59 PM Title: A Brand New World
Thank you, its true, they do.
Date: July 21 2021 2:43 PM Title: A Brand New World
Thanks, I apologize for burdening you with my problems. That was wrong of me to do.
Author's Response:
It's really fine, I understand. I hope that things get better for you, and if my story is able to help in some minuscule way then I'd be truly honored. Thanks again for reading.
-Pluto
Date: July 20 2021 4:51 PM Title: A Brand New World
I am enjoying the story, yes. I look forward to the next chapters. It's a chance at wish fulfillment, since macrophilia isn't possible scientifically, let alone the chance of a woman ever loving me. Anything to keep my depression at bay.
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm sure that isn't true! I don't know you, but I truly believe that everybody is capable and deserving of receiving love. I wish you the best, and I really appreciate your continued reviews on this series. I'm really glad that you're enjoying it, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the remaining chapters. Please take care!
-Pluto
Date: July 20 2021 4:47 PM Title: A Brand New World
Yeah, unfortunately. Which makes it all the more poignant to me when I see siblings who really care for each other, all the more bittersweet.
Date: July 20 2021 3:25 PM Title: A Brand New World
Ah ok, thanks, I must have missed a whole bunch of chapters, my bad.
Date: July 16 2021 6:57 AM Title: A Brand New World
Took me long enough to leave a review but just like you, I wasn't in the right headspace to leave one all this time...! Regardless, I am thoroughly enjoying the story thus far and loooove the character development!
I can't wait to see how jennifer will react when she meets Cathy, although I won't lie, I'm heavily rooting for Cathy in this "battle" Jennifer is kind of getting on my nerves with her over-protectiveness but I guess I can see where she's coming from.
I also can't wait to see Cathy make an appearance again! I've mentioned how I have a weakness for her..!
Regardless, this is a shorter review than my usual ones (mostly because I can't recall all the chapters and what I've read in them) but still a meaningful one!
Awesome work as always, and I love the fact you accepted the role of this fiction as an erotic one, cause that's what it is in my mind as well lol.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Hey, I'm really glad to see a review from you! No worries about not reviewing, though, I'm happy just knowing that you're enjoying the story. With that being said, I always really enjoy your thoughts!
I'm very happy that you're liking the story so far! Character development has certainly been the focus, so I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Yeah, I certainly couldn't forget about a character like Cathy! I hope you enjoy her return, since I know you're a fan of her. I am too, so I'll do my best!
Absolutely, Jennifer is going overboard with her protectiveness and defensiveness. That's definitely the point, and Brian will actually be talking to her about it in the next chapter. I do think it's hard to blame her, though. Her entire universe was flipped around within the last week, and she's only 18. She needs some time to adjust. However, she still needs to consider Brian's feelings. And in her conflict with Cathy, safe to say that nobody is going to want them to be in the same room!
Yeahhh, gotta just accept things for what they are sometimes. It also wouldn't make sense to spend so much time building up his sexuality only to ignore it after one sex scene. The question, I suppose, is how to make a sex scene not feel forced...
Anyway, thanks again for the review, and I hope you enjoy what happens next!
-Pluto
Date: July 16 2021 1:48 AM Title: A Brand New World
That's incredible dude. This story made me cry a lot of time. You are the best. Thanks a lot. I didn't finish yet, i begin the Chapter 9. But waouh !
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reviewing again! I'm truly happy that you're enjoying the story so much, and that the emotions are resonating with you. Thanks again for your kind words, I hope you enjoy the remaining chapters!
-Pluto
Date: May 28 2021 9:12 AM Title: A Brand New World
Hi. Wow, what a story... you sure know how to build the psychology of a protagonist. At first, I thought it was a bit flabby. But wow, what emotions, I cried for the last chapter. The characters are built, representing something strong. Thanks again for this masterpiece.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the extremely kind review. I'm honored that I was able to elicit strong emotions, since that's certainly what I'm trying to do. I'm also glad that you're enjoying the characters, and I hope you enjoy how they develop from here. I'm hesitant to accept such high praise, but your kind words really mean a lot to me. Thanks again for reading, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: May 23 2021 3:21 PM Title: A Brand New World
Great writing. I love the details, development, smooth transitions and thought patterns.
Keep up the superb work.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story, and I seriously appreciate your kind words about my writing. I'll definitely keep it up, so I hope you'll continue to enjoy it! Thanks again.
-Pluto
Date: May 21 2021 5:56 PM Title: A Brand New World
This series has been great from the get go. The fact that a tiny man is being helpled and protected by so many giant women is a fun and heartwarming change from the stories I usually read. Then again I prefer gentle stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I love gentle stories where the tiny has to be protected, too. Probably an obvious thing to say, since that's what I decided to write about... anyway, it gives me the warm and fuzzies. I wouldn't say I'm annoyed by it, but it does sometimes feel like most of the stories on this site are about mean/cruel giants, which can get a little old for me. So, I wanted to try something a little different. I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: May 14 2021 6:17 PM Title: A Brand New World
Im sorry youre going through that right now pluto, take as much time off as you need we arent going anywere.
Get well soon
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your concern, I really appreciate it. Flare-ups happen sometimes, and I'm hoping it's just because of stress due to finals. Until then, just gotta take it easy. I hope to have more chapters up soon! Thanks again for your kind words.
-Pluto
Date: May 03 2021 2:16 PM Title: A Brand New World
Welcome, and thank you for your consideration, I hope you don't feel obligated to do anything on my account. The story is yours, write what you enjoy.
Date: May 02 2021 3:00 PM Title: A Brand New World
Thanks for the kind response, you bring up valid points. In the end,the story is yours, so please take my comments with a grain of salt. Do with it as you will and have fun. I look forward to reading more to see how characters develop. I appreciate your responses, it's always possible I can be wrong about my opinions, or jump-the-gun-so-to-speak, so your patience is very heartening. Your writing is indeed very thought provoking, as are your comments.
Author's Response:
No worries at all, like I said I really appreciate your thoughts! She's a tough character for me to navigate, so I hope you enjoy the direction I have planned. I can assure you though, I will never try to justify her actions, or treat them as anything other than abusive and cruel. Thank you for your kind words, it means a lot that you're finding my stuff to be thought provoking. I hope you enjoy where we go from here!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: May 02 2021 1:00 AM Title: A Brand New World
This was unexpected but not un-welcomed. I'll be looking forward to the official beginning of this story!
Author's Response:
A surprise to be sure, but a welcome one, perhaps? I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to the official beginning! Hopefully soon. Until then, I'm really glad to have you back!
-Pluto
Date: May 01 2021 4:37 PM Title: A Brand New World
I'm glad this story is back. That said, I have two things to say, one, I'm hoping there will be more info as to how Brian was revealed to be innocent, and two, and this is just my personal opinion, I don't know how to feel about his mom feeling guilty, it seems completely out of character for the way she was described in the first part of the series, I just don't find it believable. I'd have less trouble believing she didn't regret anything and Jennifer left her for it, that would actually be more satisfying in a weird way, since the whole "everybody being-happy-together-sunshine-and-rainbows-idea just seems off, I mean, the earlier part made it seem like his Mom was utterly disgusting and beyond redeption, let alone feelings of remorse. Sometimes families need to leave toxic family members to be happy family, and I just feel like that would have been more believable, I'm having trouble suspending my disbelief.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad to have you back, and I seriously appreciate the feedback. Brian's mom is a tough character to navigate for me, so I'm definitely paying attention to how people react to her. So, I'll just explain my thought process a bit, if that's okay~
So, the flashbacks of her being awful in prison, as well as her fight with Brian, took place three years prior to the start of the story. The only current action we've seen of her so far is when she stated on TV that she didn't care about Brian's death, since he's no longer her son. Obviously a horrible thing, and I'm not about to excuse that, but one could make the argument that she was doing that to protect herself and Jen (again, not a justification, just an explanation). Outside of that, a long time has passed since she became the sole guardian of her daughter. So, I thought some change wouldn't be a huge leap, but I obviously could be wrong.
As for Jen, the unfortunate truth is that she has nowhere to go. She's still a minor, and like Brian said in part 1 they have no other family. So, even though their mom is toxic, it's not so easy to get away from her. I'm 2000% with you, though, sometimes people need to cut toxic family members out of their lives. However, it's also important to remember that a lot of people simply can't do that easily, due to outside circumstances. Which absolutely sucks!!
So, basically I just thought it made sense for her to be remorseful. I kinda felt like making her 100% mean and indifferent would make her too one-dimensional, if that makes sense. So, yeah, those were my thoughts. Sorry for the super long response haha, but I've obviously given it a lot of thought! I fully accept that I might have made a bad call, though.
Lastly, though, I do have to say that it's very premature to say that I'm going for a "everybody happy together sunshine and rainbows" thing. She hasn't even spoken with Brian yet, so I hope you'll see how that goes before making a judgement. Regardless, thank you so much again for your thoughts! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
-Pluto