Date: May 08 2021 1:44 AM Title: Repentance or Damnation?
Ok, there were a few gramatical errors; but honestly the content of your story simply made them a mere negligable accourance and not a distraction.
Quite honestly this is one of the best stories recently posted. Great work on your part, and thank you for posting it.
Looking forward to your next story.
Thank you so much for both of your reviews. They truly mean a lot.
Date: April 30 2021 12:08 AM Title: A Miracle
Very very nice!
I especially like how quickly you move your story along without being bogged down in long, detailed explanations.
Rather than tell us about the life of the person who's skeleton was in her other flat, it would be better to hear you tell us about how long they repented in Sister Maria's flat. Even better, with the reward of eternal Heaven as the person's goal for repentence; did they go someplace up in the clouds or did they become part of Sister Maria's flats? Perhaps their eternal soul is one with Sister Maria's foot filth / odor. What is Heaven to a foot worshipper?
Would like to hear more of the experience of our protagonist within Sister Maria's flat.