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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2021 1:44 AM Title: Repentance or Damnation?


Ok, there were a few gramatical errors; but honestly the content of your story simply made them a mere negligable accourance and not a distraction. 

Quite honestly this is one of the best stories recently posted.  Great work on your part, and thank you for posting it.

Looking forward to your next story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for both of your reviews. They truly mean a lot.

Reviewer: Ponski Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2021 10:24 PM Title: A Miracle

I love how her piety was combined with cruelty. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Medrinisoc Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2021 7:50 PM Title: A Miracle

I love this story so far and can't wait to read more. Love the attention to detail and the rapid story progression. Hope to see more about the odor and maybe Sister Maria forgets again.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2021 4:15 PM Title: Walking to Salvation

Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2021 3:55 AM Title: A Miracle

We're all going to hell

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2021 12:08 AM Title: A Miracle

Very very nice!

I especially like how quickly you move your story along without being bogged down in long, detailed explanations.

Rather than tell us about the life of the person who's skeleton was in her other flat, it would be better to hear you tell us about how long they repented in Sister Maria's flat.  Even better, with the reward of eternal Heaven as the person's goal for repentence; did they go someplace up in the clouds or did they become part of Sister Maria's flats?  Perhaps their eternal soul is one with Sister Maria's foot filth / odor.  What is Heaven to a foot worshipper? 

Would like to hear more of the experience of our protagonist within Sister Maria's flat.

Reviewer: RubyRoseGold Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2021 11:00 PM Title: A Miracle

omg I love this so much! nuns AND foot odor? this type of story is something I've only roleplayed once before and I adore the idea so much. it's written very well and I like this story a lot <3

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