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Reviewer: Nobodyknows Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2022 3:31 PM Title: A Taboo Blossoming

Can't wait for some vore action!



Author's Response: Don't you worry, my friend, the vore chapter is in the works!

Reviewer: Nobodyknows Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2022 3:27 PM Title: A Shrinking Resolution

Hurray for more! Also nice on getting this out much sooner.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I've had some extra time lately and have been cranking as much as I can. Stay tuned for more in the near future!

Reviewer: Nobodyknows Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2022 5:52 PM Title: The Morning

Hope you release more in the near future!



Author's Response:

Yo, sorry for the late response!

I've been busy with life and such, but I will be getting back into the swing of things!

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2022 3:48 PM Title: Bliss

Really hot chapter. I love the interaction and descriptions between the son and mother. Their relationship will never be the same. I wonder if Mick will go head first sometime. Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response:

Hey, glad to hear from you again!

Thanks for the feedback, I did enjoy writing this chapter, so it makes me happy that you and so many others liked it!

Be prepared for what's to come. 😉

Reviewer: eliwoodx Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2022 12:59 PM Title: The Package

What an awesome and sexy story. Great work on Chapter 4!



Author's Response:

Thanks Eli!

I hope you'll enjoy what else I have in store!

Reviewer: Killer_Huge Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2021 2:32 AM Title: The Package

This is dope, hope you're having fun 😎



Author's Response:

Hey Killer_Huge!

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! It means a lot to receive some positive words from one of my favorite writers! 

P.S. I hope the next chapter for Honeymoon House comes out soon!

Reviewer: Underfoottiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2021 4:51 PM Title: The Package

The anticipation is killing me. You definitely have my attention. Keep up the great writing. 



Author's Response:

Hey Underfoottiny,

I'm glad I've got your attention. I will give it my all in the next chapter, for sure!


Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2021 3:40 AM Title: The Package

I hope you are doing well. 

 

I have made Mick a part of the Shrinking condition story and have it to where Blink has some reason for Steve's condition. I hope you find that the crossover is good. Having Steve and Mick be old friends from highschool to deal with the time seperation.

 

I hope you continue to write.



Author's Response:

Yo, thegreatrizzo

Thanks for checking in. I appreciate you putting Mick in the story!

I hope he plays a minor role, I would hate to take the spotlight away from Steve!

As far as writing "Dazed", yes, I am still writing it, but currently I am doing life stuff and I haven't had the time to get to it. 

I'll get back in the swing of things once life starts settling down.

Keep on writing!

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2021 3:39 PM Title: The Package

I would say that Mick and Steve met in college or something like that. Nick is 25 and Steve is 19, soon to be 20. Mick could have been a good friend or mentor when Steve was in middle school and told him about his condition. or Steve was aiming for an internship at Mick company and they became good friends that way, keeping in touch and all. There are a lot of ideas.



Author's Response:

I did have this idea of basing their age off of the year "A Shrinking Condition" was published, back in 2012 while "Dazed" takes place in 2021, so that would make Mick 16 years old at the time. It is possible that he met Steve sometime between then and now.

I do like the college idea, maybe Mick is the only other person to open up to Steve about his fetish?

Mick could also reveal that, just like Steve, he has developed feelings for Amy?

After Mick tells him this, Steve accepts his own feelings towards Kady and Allison. 

Their friendship is solidified through this conversation?

This is all just brainstorming, but I love it, keep it coming!!!

Reviewer: thegreatrizzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2021 7:14 AM Title: The Package

Great start. I like the concept. As a person that writes part of the options in the a shrinking condition. I would enjoy a little bit of a crossover. Mike could be one of the friends that Steve met at college. became good friends and told him his secret. I hope we get to see Amy play with Mick with her boobs.



Author's Response:

Thank you, that means a lot coming from one of the writers of the new "A Shrinking Condition". I actually like the idea of having Mick and Steve be friends, maybe high-school buddies or something? I'll brainstorm ideas and hopefully come up with something good!

P.S. Amy really loves to play with her boobs when she gets off. Chances are looking good for Mick!

Reviewer: smotherslave101 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2021 2:41 PM Title: The Package

Amazing start look forward to seeing it evolve 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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