Date: May 10 2022 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Terra
Excellent as always, looking forward to seeing how Linda copes with her
new reality now that she isn't as drugged up and how the rest go about
harvesting Earth and what they ultimately do with its inhabitants.
Date: May 01 2021 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Request
Oh really liked this! Though if Vin is the more cold and calculating of the farmers would she even treat the humans with enough dignity to use the term rape? I mean it is rape, but from her point of view they're just bugs and bugs can't rape they just breed or mate
Author's Response:
Feedback taken and appreciated! going forward she will reflect this. Thank you!
Date: April 23 2021 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Request
What if one of Zanna's sisters arrives and out-classes Zanna in size and power so much that Zanna is basically the cute little sibling and humans are dust.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2021 2:47 PM Title: Chapter One - Zanna
Hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Hi Lyneal!
Making an account to just offer this encouragement meant alot! I was inspired to add another chapter! :)
Thanks again!
JFT
Date: April 18 2021 6:55 AM Title: Chapter One - Zanna
This is a really interesting concept, and one that I'd love to see continued if you choose to go that route. It's a really unique premise.
Author's Response:
It has been written up to Chatper 4, So we will see if there is still interest beyond that point! :D
[Report This]Date: April 18 2021 6:28 AM Title: Chapter One - Zanna
I like this one and signed on the line the best. The other 2 didn't give the mcs enough time to build up to being cruel. Magic talking planets is an interesting idea.
Author's Response:
The one-short stories are done based on a couple of lines of concept from a request form ^^ They tend to be laser focused on a specific idea.
Although this feedback would of been good on those stories :D
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JFT