Date: May 19 2021 8:12 PM Title: A Civil Discussion
Let me start by saying that I've really liked this story so far and I think that you're an incredible writer! You've seen my reviews on your other stories, I'm sure. I love your focus on M/f foot content as well as M/f fluff.
With such a cute title and romantic setup, I was really hoping this would be a sweet story for this couple! The first few chapters explored her new life situation wonderfully, and I'm definitely a fan of humiliation, so there's no real big complaints from me even with the new developments.
That being said...
Fuck Teddy. What a miserable prick.
He's shallow enough to completely disregard the woman he fell in love with and agreed to be faithful to "for better or worse, in sickness and in health" all because he misses the feeling of a pussy around his dick. Then, he has the audacity to explain how she's stuck with him if she wants to live a comfortable life and tell her that he wants to fuck other women for her. On top of all that, when she starts sobbing, he dares to tell her that there's "no need to cry" and calls her a cutesy name like "snugglepuff" as if he at all deserves to be cute and happy with her in this moment.
As a man, I can say that Teddy makes me sick.
This is not at all a criticism of your writing or even the story itself!!! Just a little rant. I mean, if you're goal was to make Teddy utterly unlikeable, then congrats lol
Can't wait to see where this story goes from here! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for both of your kind responses. This is one of the series I've liked more and more as I put out more chapters. I think I'm starting to hit my groove as far as romantic drama goes. A few chapters in the future do lean more heavily into the warn, comfy feelings of the earlier chapters. How? You'll have to read to find out. Just know that the elements are being set up for a spectacular finish.
Date: May 13 2021 11:13 PM Title: A Civil Discussion
Poor Gabby, things look pretty bleak for her. At least Wilma seems to not be a total bitch or anything. Hoping that even as she gets shifted out into the third wheel role, they don't neglect her too terribly much.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2021 3:47 PM Title: A Civil Discussion
Urghhh!!!! I fucking hate Teddy!!
He's a smug prick who has lost all redeemability for me.
The way he's basically holding his wife in a prison of a marriage, she can't divorce him without losing everything, and he's basically got free reign to fuck around and sleep with other women, while she is left with nothing.
And he thinks....he actually thinks she'll "see that he's right"
.......is he on drugs!?! Or operating on some level of stupidity normal humans aren't able to reach??
Gabby needs to figure a way out, where she can keep her finances and kick this asshole to the curb.
Great chapter as always here writing wise, and I am excited to see where this goes (and hoping that Teddy get's left with nothing!!! he doesn't deserve anything)