Date: August 27 2021 4:53 AM Title: A Shocking Development
While I skipped over the sex scenes, I still really really enjoyed this. I was rooting for Teddy until the gambling, and then he just got worse. You nailed that descent from caring dude to controlling and manipulative within a few chapters. And it was subtle too, but Birthday Bash was the point of no return. Bad enough he changed her name and her license and then was super condescending before. I also didn't think I'd like Wilma until that ending. She's found good people
Date: June 12 2021 8:07 PM Title: Previously...
Hmm, last chapter I was surprised and awwing that Wilma willingly shrank herself to be the same size as Gabby. But now I'm worried she did that more for her own kinks and desires then out of compassion and love for Gabby. We'll have to see if Iggy can control himself. Wilma might beg and love to be dominated, but Gabby's probably had enough of being toyed with for awhile now and just wants some gentle affection and TLC. I hope Iggy and Wilma will respect her boundaries and ease her into their bedroom games, not giving her a choice or moving too fast might cause her to break down again.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2021 8:03 AM Title: You Scratch My Back
Absolutely amazing story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 07 2021 2:25 PM Title: You Scratch My Back
Ok, I honestly was not expecting that! Wilma shrinking down is a nice touch.
(Have to question if this was the right choice, as it's an insanely major life choice, to shrink herself down to provide compansionship from a woman who so far has only had a employer/employee relationship with.)
But it's going to be interesting seeing how things play out.
It's great that Wilma is validating Gabby's feelings, and her mental and emotional state and wellbeing (something her dick of a husband has completely stopped caring for)
Great chapter, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! We'll see a bit more of the thought process that led to this decision next chapter, so look forward to that!
Date: June 07 2021 2:20 PM Title: Birthday Bash
........Ok, is Teddy actually losing his freaking mind here??!!
A better birthday preent (from a decent husband/decent human being) would have been taking Gabby away to spend time with just the two of them.
But as we've all seen, this asshole isn't a decent human being.
Very well written chapter though XD As always you wrote the sexual content well.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was a bit worried that this was a bit rare, but it geeky right given what I was going for.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2021 11:53 PM Title: Patricia
Ok, Patricia seems hot and ripe for Giantess content.
(plus the line about her tongue stud being used as dildo was gold)
However I still think she's fucking horrible for what she did to Gabby, and how she treated her.
And Teddy!?!? Tiny_Signifigance was right in their review, he's basically holding his wife in a marriage because if she leaves she won't have any of the comfort or stuff she's worked for to get.
And he basically forgot all his wedding vows and his promises to her, because he misses having some pussy wrapped around his cock.....what an asshole!!!
And then he condescends to Gabby about how this is for her!?!?
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(calming breath)
This is not a bash against your writing of this story, it is really well written and I love the content.
And it's an achievement to make me this mad about characters (Teddy and Patricia)
Plus the content sexually in this chapter was very well done.
Wilma.....I think she needs to 1) stop saying stuff to upset Gabby, and 2) Handle her own fucking emotions and not run out of the room crying when your employer is covered in cum and bodily fluids and needs help.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I'm really happy at how Teddy turned out. He gets a heated reaction from the audience for the right reasons, which is hard to get right consistently. As for Patricia, I don't usually write giantess content, so I'm glad to have had a good enough track record with both this chapter and the Wilma chapters.
As for what Wilma's deal is, she has some things going on in the background that we're getting into later. Just know that there's more coming up for that character. She's acting odd now, but it'll make sense soon.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2021 11:36 PM Title: Patricia
Thoughts on Patricia:
She's a homewrecking bitch who will only make things worse for Gabby, and I dislike her.
BUT! You described her well, and she seems like a sexy chracter to have fun with size wise.
(content wise, it was great the way you wrote Gabby stuck under her ass and the whole unintentional inclusion of her in their fun)
Wilma......really, she needs to learn to read the room better, Gabby is obviously going through a horrific time and she says the wrong things to her, and then rungs off crying....seriously.
Teddy is an asshole still, I hope Gabby gets her happiness, (and get her financial situation back, she worked her ass off for her money and now she's unable to get it if she divorces this prick Teddy!)
I hope Gabby does get happyness, and Teddy winds up with nothing.
You continue to write the content (and story, despite hurting Gabby XD) really well, and I am enjoying it with every new addition.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was trying to come up with the sort of person who would come into a person's house and have sex with their husband in front of them, and worked from there to get Patricia. Once I had her personality down, the idea for a one-sidely unaware situation just sort of flowed naturally.
Always glad to hear you're still enjoying each new chapter.
Date: May 19 2021 8:23 PM Title: Patricia
Wow, what an unbelievably insensitive bitch! Patty and Teddy deserve each other, I guess. lol
This chapter was a really big turn in the story, as it really solidifies Teddy's infidelity and pretty much makes him past hope.
I really do wonder what will happen to our poor little Gabby... Will Teddy (somehow) come to his senses, and somehow be able to save his relationship with Gabby? Will Gabby find a better man who will treat her right? If she does, will she find a way to leave her awful husband? Will Teddy start to treat her even worse? Can she escape? If she does, what would happen to her? How will Wilma end up playing into it all?
I, for one, can't wait to find out! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read your other upcoming projects too!
Date: May 19 2021 8:12 PM Title: A Civil Discussion
Let me start by saying that I've really liked this story so far and I think that you're an incredible writer! You've seen my reviews on your other stories, I'm sure. I love your focus on M/f foot content as well as M/f fluff.
With such a cute title and romantic setup, I was really hoping this would be a sweet story for this couple! The first few chapters explored her new life situation wonderfully, and I'm definitely a fan of humiliation, so there's no real big complaints from me even with the new developments.
That being said...
Fuck Teddy. What a miserable prick.
He's shallow enough to completely disregard the woman he fell in love with and agreed to be faithful to "for better or worse, in sickness and in health" all because he misses the feeling of a pussy around his dick. Then, he has the audacity to explain how she's stuck with him if she wants to live a comfortable life and tell her that he wants to fuck other women for her. On top of all that, when she starts sobbing, he dares to tell her that there's "no need to cry" and calls her a cutesy name like "snugglepuff" as if he at all deserves to be cute and happy with her in this moment.
As a man, I can say that Teddy makes me sick.
This is not at all a criticism of your writing or even the story itself!!! Just a little rant. I mean, if you're goal was to make Teddy utterly unlikeable, then congrats lol
Can't wait to see where this story goes from here! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for both of your kind responses. This is one of the series I've liked more and more as I put out more chapters. I think I'm starting to hit my groove as far as romantic drama goes. A few chapters in the future do lean more heavily into the warn, comfy feelings of the earlier chapters. How? You'll have to read to find out. Just know that the elements are being set up for a spectacular finish.
Date: May 13 2021 11:13 PM Title: A Civil Discussion
Poor Gabby, things look pretty bleak for her. At least Wilma seems to not be a total bitch or anything. Hoping that even as she gets shifted out into the third wheel role, they don't neglect her too terribly much.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2021 3:47 PM Title: A Civil Discussion
Urghhh!!!! I fucking hate Teddy!!
He's a smug prick who has lost all redeemability for me.
The way he's basically holding his wife in a prison of a marriage, she can't divorce him without losing everything, and he's basically got free reign to fuck around and sleep with other women, while she is left with nothing.
And he thinks....he actually thinks she'll "see that he's right"
.......is he on drugs!?! Or operating on some level of stupidity normal humans aren't able to reach??
Gabby needs to figure a way out, where she can keep her finances and kick this asshole to the curb.
Great chapter as always here writing wise, and I am excited to see where this goes (and hoping that Teddy get's left with nothing!!! he doesn't deserve anything)
Date: May 11 2021 6:04 PM Title: Two Years in the Making
This is fun! Enjoying the story so fun, I do hope whoever they decide to bring in to "open up" their marriage eventually gets along with Gabby. I expect there will be some shenanigans at first but it'd be pretty satisfying to see them end up having a unique relationship where they all adore one another.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2021 3:47 AM Title: Two Years in the Making
I feel so sad for Gabriella
First she loses her job, and livelihood and is now reduced to a toy/insignificant being in her own home.
I have to agree with another reviwer here, her husband is not wiinning any points with me, he's ignoring and belittling her situation, and not listening to her.
And now he's "suggesting" an open marriage, which come on....It's clear he's not asking her opinion, he's saying he wants to fuck women his size and he's disregarding his wife.
Even if she said no, he'd still do it, or argue that she's not being reasonable or something.
Did their wedding vows just become a joke all of a sudden? The woman he wanted to love and spend the rest of his life with doesn't matter anymore.
Screw Teddy, I'd love to see the situations reversed and see how he likes being treated like that.
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(I may not like him, but your writing of this story is great! I am loving it, even though I am sad for Gabby)
Author's Response:
Things are going to get a lot worse for Gabby before they get better. Next chapter, it should be more clear exactly how dire her situation is. But I do have a plan that I think everyone will like. I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far, and I'll keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2021 11:30 PM Title: Two Years in the Making
I knew it!!!
I fucking knew it!! I knew he'd pull some crap like this on Gabby!
Teddy continuing to make me not like him XD
Date: May 09 2021 5:00 PM Title: Two Years in the Making
So loving it
[Report This]Date: May 05 2021 4:09 AM Title: Clean Up
Ok, fuck Teddy.
Am I the only one getting pissed off at this guy?!?!
I mean come on, his wife (who he supposedly loves) is telling him about a terrifying experience and that she was in danger.
And he just shrugs it off, and says she was being "over dramatic" and it was a mistake.
Would it be a mistake if Gabriella died!?!?! Huh Teddy would it be over dramatic then!?!
Seriously her husband is getting increasingly annoying, and not listening to his wife (can he not understand how terrifying normal everyday situations are for her now!?)
Fuck this guy.
I think he's just getting arrogant and the fact that his wife used to be the main provider, and he was just a stay at home husbad, but now "he's" the one who has all the power in the relationship, he's the one making all the decisions, and Gabriella can't do anything to stop him.
Why can I see him breaking up with her? Or having an affair?
I can just see it happening, and then he'll come up with some excuse "I have needs, you can't satisfy me anymore, I need an outlet, you're the size of a toy, etc"
XD Sorry for the rant here, but Teddy's reaction and how he shut down Gabriella trying to tell him how she felt, has pissed me off and made me not like him.
Date: May 02 2021 12:55 AM Title: A Little Help from My Friends
Interesting. I hope she gets vacuumed up but survives, and escapes when the vacuum is emptied. All completely unaware.
Author's Response:
It wasn't quite that, but I hope you get a kick out of what I actually had planned
Date: April 14 2021 7:11 PM Title: A Shocking Development
This is a fantastic start! It is incredibly well written and knowledgeable with some extra details on air conditioners. I feel like I know more now than I ever did about those things. Looking forward to a G/t story! Rarely see that here!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was looking for a complicated enough device that I could reasonably have it shrink somebody, and ended up spending far more time than was probably needed looking at different designs. I'm by no means an expert, but you can find a good amount of information about them if you're interested, which for some reason, it seems I was. :-p.