Date: March 12 2022 3:10 PM Title: Epilogue: Remy's Machine Pt 3
More sexy time with more detail is all i ask
[Report This]Date: September 16 2021 12:44 PM Title: Epilogue: Remy's Machine Pt 3
This has to be the most engrossing story I've ever read, here. 38 chapters in one evening?! Thanks for sharing this and...bravo!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Carycomic, I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: June 20 2021 2:11 PM Title: Epilogue: Remy's Machine Pt 3
I understand wanting to keep Jerry "mouse sized." But your descriptions and imagery of the massive size difference between jerry and Jen in the epilogue were too good. At least consider exploring it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. Writing the size had its own challenges so it was kept to a minimum in this story. There is a sequel coming along now and the epilogue size will be explored in the beginning, in more depth.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2021 4:08 AM Title: Epilogue: Remy's Machine Pt 3
Loved the entire story except the epilogue. I dunno, it just felt kinda rushed lol.with that said, this was an epic tale. Tysm for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback. Ch 37 was intended to be the 'true' ending, with the epilogue as a short 'gag' ending, sort of like an 'after the credits' scene in a movie, so people can finish the story at 37 and the epilogue is not essential.
Date: June 16 2021 11:47 PM Title: Epilogue: Remy's Machine Pt 3
Amazing story! But this epilogue is too much of a tease. Will there be a sequel? I personally would love to see this smaller Jerry have to deal with Jennifer's big butt at that scale, lol.
Also, the stuff with Stuart surprised me, I was expecting something to go wrong, but I never imagined he'd cheat on Jennifer like that, good plot twist there, among many others.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, anonlol, and sorry to leave you hanging! No guarantees but a sequel could happen. I think of Jerry's mouse size being a fixture, and his super small size is a temporary 'glitch' which would need to be corrected for certain story developments. But not before having some fun with it. I'm wary about gratuitous sequels so the plot would need to be right.