[Report This]Date: June 03 2021 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 29: Let the Games Begin (Again)
This is one of the absolute best stories on this site. I love how Jerry is realizing that he loves Jen, and hoping he continues to like being controlled and dominated by her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, Vyse!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2021 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 29: Let the Games Begin (Again)
Although the rescue was predictable, I don't think it was meant to be unpredictable. It was awesome and well-earned. I truly hope he tells her how he feels at one point. It's quite clear he gets off on her dominance just as much as she does. In any case. Great job and thanks for being so consistent with this gem. Hope to see it continue, I'll certainly be here to read :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate your kind feedback. There was going to be a scene where Jennifer confronted Samantha and rescued Jerry. But it raised all kinds of problems and I had to drop it. It also cheated the story out of a proper reunion. In the drawer, Jerry is in no condition to have a reunion with anyone, and seeing Jennifer again needed to have a big impact.
The entire story is planned out so things will get resolved; this is not going to be one of those stories that just continues endlessly without resolution.