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Reviewer: Ryantherebel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2022 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I enjoyed this more than I thought would. You do a good job capturing the tone and spirit of the Disney version in your rewrite of the scenes and it's great to see an iconic character who influenced all of us here get to live happily ever after as giant goddess. 


Do you think you are going to do any more fanfic rewrites of famous giantess centric scenes?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I've considered a few one-shots of other gts-themed stories, either from movies or from TV shows.  For the time being (as of this writing), I'm juggling three different anime fanfics involving gts elements.  So until I either complete one of them or get bored and shelf it for another time, I can't promise anything further, but it's something I'll keep in the back-end of my mind for another time.

Again, glad you enjoyed my first attempt at a story on this site.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 18 2021 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 4: Trial Episode

This is a brilliant conclusion with an amendment to the conclusion of the typical Alice in Wonderland adaptation. It would be interesting to see how Alice's life would pass from here, how the relationships she has with those outside of her family differ or how similarities could be maintained.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the praise.  I got somewhat intrigued on how to finish the final one-shot, so I opted to have Alice not only stay as a giantess, but to have the reality in her world alter significantly so that she became a giantess (and royalty) in her original world once she woke up from the dream of Wonderland.  Figured I would try to have a surprise twist ending to finish this little project of mine.  Glad it caught your eye.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mushroom/Bird in Tree Episode

All three of the former scenarios are most interesting. Were you considering a few more works that look at how the conclusions of each would've affected the path of the story?

Author's Response:

Something I may consider in the future.  Right now I'm writing other works that are a mix of both giantess and harem elements.  If I'm feeling curious and brave enough, I might try my hand at something similar to this little project of mine.  I went with a hypothetical "what if" story line based on "Alice in Wonderland" because I already had a lot of backstory to work with.  Maybe one day I'll do something similar with another story, like "Attack of the 50ft Woman" or "Honey I Blew Up the Kid".  Don't want to go too far down the rabbit hole (pun intended), but it's an avenue I might pursue at some point.

Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

Some marvellous reinterpretation of how the narrative could've transpired while maintaining key characteristics of the source material. However I'd like to point out that, while it was a cake in the book, the film you're using involved biscuits/cookies.

Author's Response:

Minor material deviation on my part, I'll confess.  Leaving aside the cake-cookie dichotomy in this story, I'm happy that this story caught your eye and amused you.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2021 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Trial Episode

"[...]and an easy-to-frighten DoorMouse." - Whilst a "DoorMouse" instead of a "Dormouse" is probably something Carroll would've written, I think it's a typo on your end.

"Alice reached out with the greatest of ease and snachted the stack of cards[...]" - As I checked myself on how "snatched" is actually written with the help of Google Translate(which in my opinion is a better spelling checking tool than an actual translator) I learned that "snachted" appearantly is a dutch word.

 

Interesting idea to bring in a lot of the most iconic scenes of Disney's Movie Iteration(without any Sizechanging) into this chapter by having Alice recalling them.

I am a little sad that the "Why is Rule 42 the oldest in the book instead of Rule 1?" exchange between Alice and the King of Hearts wasn't in this.

Is it just Beautification though? Isn't more in the Ballpark of Age Progression? Alice is about seven years old after all. (Her Age is actually never stated in the book but she declares her own age as "seven and a half years" old in the sequel.

"He could tell as much from the swell of both her bosom and her posterior, as well as how her waistline shrunk somewhat and her legs transformed to be both thick and yet surprisingly long to make them have perfect proportionality.  It was like she had runway model legs now.  Her entire body seemed to mature by a few years, making her have the appearance of a girl now in her late teens or early twenties rather than someone who was in her early teenage years." - So you did acknowledge her apparent age increase even if not right away.

"I'll have you returned with a snap of my fingers and you'll be at home with your family once more." - It might be a foolish question but does the Cheshire Cat have fingers to snap with?

"[...]if she wanted to be loved by the people and feared or hated by them,[...] - I think this sentence is missing a crucial "not"...

Interesting twist at the end. It fits the end of Through the Looking-Glass (Alice the Red Queen) quite well. Was that intentional?

As how much the Cheshire Cat changed: I wonder if the Giant Stature of Great Britian's Royal Family is a unique trait of something shared by all nobles. That at least would be a more reasonable foundation of being considered a noble than a simple "my family is better than yours" as it seemed to be back when it was of huge significance.

A surprising and great end for this series of one-shots. A perfect rating from my side. I am looking forward for what you will do next whatever it may be.

I have a (series of closely related) question(s) though:

How do the giant nobles live? Have they equally giant Maids and Butlers? Or are they expected to do the heavy lifting themselves as, though they're probably more than capable, seems unbecoming of such a status.

As you can probably tell I am quite intrigued by the vastly different world you gave us a glimpse of in the end. ^^'



Author's Response:

Wow...that's a lot of questions and analysis.  Here goes my attempt at explanation:

-On the Beautification, I decided to have Alice more physically appealing into some sort of sex goddess without being overly explicit or enter into R-rated territory.  I suppose her transformation could be seen as age progression, at least in the physical sense of the concept.  Her body was meant to be that of someone in her late teens or twenties, with all of the potential physical allure that could come with it.

-In the 1951 Disney film, the Cheshire Cat appears to have hands for paws, so he does have fingers from what I recall (albeit, short stubby ones - but fingers all the same).

-Once again, I know I made some typos here and there.  Much as I try to be cognizant of them, a few seem to get through the cracks despite my best efforts.

-Sorry I didn't include the Rule 42 dialogue between Alice and the King of Hearts.  My mind was anchored to the original Disney script when I was typing out that part in the story.

-As for the part where Alice returns home, I was trying to find a way where she becomes a giant in her original world.  I considered maybe she got ahold of the mushroom or the cookies in some way and ate them, or some kind of wormhole opened up between her world and Wonderland.  In the end, I decided to have the Cheshire Cat pull off a neat trick and send her back home some way.  He can teleport on a whim it seems, so that adds mystery to how far his abilities go, at least in my opinion.  I also decided to have Alice be royalty in her newly modified world since to me, she has princess-like qualities already.  So I ended up having her family be royalty to make things normal from their perspective.  To give partial credit for the inspiration, I thought of the story "Children of Vandan" by Malaka and decided to make Alice and her sister be giant princesses.  At the time, it seemed an alluring concept when I was typing it out.

-Finally, as for the world I ended up creating, I decided to cut it off where Alice entered her new home.  I first thought of her living in a castle like royalty of old, but Buckingham Palace would prove too small for her to reside in, so either an entirely new castle would have to be created, or something like a more commonplace residence on a larger scale.  Since I made Alice's family royalty, I opted for a mansion as a happy middleground solution.  I considered introducing Alice's mother, but then the chapter would have ended up becoming far longer than I had intended it to be.  On the topic of servants, if it were up to me, I would have them be normal sized personally, for in the world I created, only royals and nobles would be giants, but again that's a purely hypothetical pondering and my personal choice.  I'm sure I've left people with a LOT of questions about Alice's revised world, but sadly I'm going to leave that up for speculation.

I'm glad you've enjoyed this chapter and the project in its entirety.  Hopefully my next work will be just as intriguing and entertaining.  Until then...

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2021 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

Well now we know why you took so long to write the last one and it was worth it. The twist at the end to me feels like you left it open for more, like visiting a world where Alice grows up as a giant princess. Maybe you could do more stories in the same vein, a what if series of famous giantess scenes like the mother in Honey I Blew Up the Kid growing even bigger or the Super Hot Giant Alien getting her way in Dude Where's My Car.

 



Author's Response:

Those are interesting avenues for consideration that you've brought up - particularly the "Honey I Blew Up the Kid" scenario.  As for the ending, I was brainstorming a way for Alice to be a giant at the very end after returning home from Wonderland, and in a way that it would not cause panic in her original world.  So to remedy that, I ended up altering Alice's world where her family were all giants and decided to make them royalty so that people would revere them (and probably fear them a little, given their size).

I don't know if I'll make another project based on "Alice in Wonderland" or not.  For now, I'm considering different stories at the moment, but it's something I'll keep on the shelf for another time if I have the drive to see it though.  Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: tostitos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2021 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 4: Trial Episode

Definitely an improvement to the courtroom scene! There's also something very splendid about giant Alice walking off on top of the land at the end of each chapter and this joins the rest in that goodness PLUS has that benefit of the ending.

Daydreams into reality. Cheshire Cat is a gentleman and a scholar, and so are you. I hope time and energy can come to you and you'll be able to do more projects in the future.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the growth sequence in this chapter.  I figured I would have Alice grow the most at the grand finale, and I also wanted her to stay a giant after returning from Wonderland.  While it certainly was a stretch, I ended up having the Cheshire Cat be the one to serve as a sort of deus ex machina to Alice's dilemma of returning home.  Thought he had enough mystery to his character to be able to pull something off like what I ended up writing in the closing part of the chapter.

Overall, I'm glad you've enjoyed this project of mine.  Not sure when I'll have the drive for another one, but I've got some ideas brainstorming for now.  Until then...

Reviewer: GentleFan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2021 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 4: Trial Episode

This has been a nice series. You captured the tone of the original book well in your writing and I enjoyed how much bigger Alice got this time around. Looking forward to the next project!



Author's Response:

I appreciate that.  Thank you for the kind words.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 21 2021 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

It would be better that these stories were based on the Lewis Carroll book than on the Walt Disney animated movie. 



Author's Response:

To each their own.  Some will prefer the book; others will prefer the movie.  I'm of the latter.

Reviewer: sizefan27 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2021 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I just wanted show my appreciation for what you’re doing with this. I love the writing and the idea of the “what if this instead...” aspect! Excited for the last chapter! Also curious if you’ll be venturing out to other mainstream giantess/growth scenes and possibly redoing any of those?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words.  I'm glad you like my writing style.  Hopefully, I'll be done with the last chapter before the month is out.

As for other writing projects, I've got some things in mind.  The original works aren't gts-themed, but I'm hoping to make them so with what I have in mind.  I'll find out if I have the drive for them after I'm done with this series.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2021 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 3: Mushroom/Bird in Tree Episode

"The sight was somewhat comical, as a being of gigantic proportions was being cowed and intimidated by another creature which was several times smaller than her.  It was practically the equivalent of a horse being intimidated by a mouse in terms of size." - Well, we humans tend to be afraid of Insects that are even smaller in comparison, so it's not that funny.

"Dropping her eggs into her nest, she fell down in said nest as her surroundings changed suddendly." - There is no third "d" in "suddenly".

 

I am somewhat surprised by how the chapter went. After Alice's previous Acts of Growth Cake Gluttony I expected her to down at least her growth piece of mushroom if not uprooting the mushroom as a whole and eat the increasing side of it.

You voiced your concerns about the end of the chapter, but I have another irk with it. The bird is of course one-dimensional, but that doesn't mean it's writing needs to repeat phrases.

Once again, you did the source justice and your deviation didn't seem too out of place.



Author's Response:

Fair point on the typos.  Those tend to be my kryptonite when I get wrapped up in a writing frenzy, so one or two will get through the cracks from time to time.  I'm glad you appreciate my source referencing on the whole.  I try to commit to the original when it comes to details.

In response to your first comment, yeah I get that humans tend to freak out at the sight of spiders and most insects in general.  Some of us may feel inclined to swat or crush them outright, either out of fear or annoyance.  Basically I was trying to get across the idea that if she so desired, Alice could have swatted the bird away like some pesky, minor nuisance instead of frantically ducking and avoiding her as she did in the Disney film.  The fact that she didn't in the film seemed a little silly to me.  Then again, her general temperament is that of a proper young lady, so it would be out of character for her to swat or crush the Bird to a pulp, even though she was perfectly capable of doing so.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2021 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I hope for the last one, you let her really humiliate the Red Queen. She was about to lay into her in the original but started shrinking before she could finish it. Maybe now she can really cut her down to size. 



Author's Response:

I have something in the works.  I don't want to give anything specific away, but rest assured, there won't be any shrinking to stop Alice from putting the Queen in her place.

Reviewer: Mhmike Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2021 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I can't tell you how rarely I write reviews, but after reading the first two chapters and the other reviews, I had to thank you for this wonderful story. It is clearly very true to the original in tone and theme. But I feel no one else has commended you on the *giantess*


side of it. Your detail in describing *size* is so important to me. You make compelling size comparisons and make clear how BIG she is at any given moment. It's done so well and is truly a rare talent among all gts writers in my opinion. The SIZE is so often ignored like its a given or something. Yes you deviate from the story slightly but thats why it's a giantess story AND an Alice in Wonderland story. 


Thank you for your writing. I simply had to compliment what is, in my opinion, nearly perfect giantess writing. Thank you and well


done sir. 



Author's Response:

I'm flattered you consider my work nearly perfect.  I simply felt compelled to try my hand at putting forth a form of giantess fanfiction after partaking of a number of stories on this website.  I tend to find descriptors of size to be the most tantalizing aspect of gts-themed literature, so I'm glad that I've caught your interest with this series of one-shots.  Hopefully, the last chapter will be entertaining with what I have in mind.  In any case, I'm happy that you like what you've read so far.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 18 2021 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: White Rabbit's House Episode

"[...]that would be the case if Alice gave it some serious thought, if the logical part of her brain was in control that day." To be fair: Especially someone strictly logical would probably become insane in Wonderland fairly quickly, as such a person would most likely surmise that s/he already descended enough into madness to have such kinds of hallucinations resisting would be for naught anyway.

"All because she ate a cake of all things."

"[...]in one hand and a smoking pipe in the other, which he was currently enjoying."

" "We'll make it clear that monsters aren't welcome here." "

"Tipping the jar forward as if she were drinking from a thimble,[...]"

 

I certainly didn't expect the "eating of all Growth Cakes at once" to appear here again - as it is kinda a repeat after all. It was well implemented though, so I am not complaining.

I also didn't expect the second growing spurt to also have a slight increase in age, even if it was just mentioned at the side like a footnote. Not that it's too unlikely, if there are cakes can make you grow to a supernaturally immense size upon consumption, why wouldn't there a recipe that makes you grow older, (or younger for that matter)?



Author's Response:

Sorry about the occasional typos here and there.  This chapter took several days and longer than I expected, so I was running out of steam at times trying to finish it up before I hit a literary wall, so to speak.  And yeah, a place like Wonderland is highly illogical in a number of ways.  Anyone in it would probably think they were either in a very intense and long dream, or else they might figure they descended into some kind of madness where they cannot tell what is real anymore.  Given that Alice already ate a growth cake early on in the 1951 film, one would think she might err on caution and avoid eating another one just like it.  So clearly she wasn't quite thinking things through completely when she took a bite of yet another growth cake.

As for the second growth spurt, I decided on a whim to make Alice more physically attractive as she grew, making her appear to be a sort of living goddess with a mix of both power (from her size) and beauty.  So yeah she probably changed from a young teen to an older teen by some degree from what I wrote.  I was conflicted by how far I wanted to go given that I started this project with a PG rating, so I didn't want to get too sexually explicit with the descriptions.  Think of it as a kind of teaser I suppose.

Anyways, hope you found the chapter at least somewhat entertaining.

Reviewer: tostitos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 17 2021 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 2: White Rabbit's House Episode

The iconic scene.
Of the various ways that depict how Alice grows in the Rabbit's house across iterations this one always sticks with me. Thanks for doing it justice, and for keeping the growth growing.

The Rabbit would be far more hesitant to go along with the now bigger Alice, I feel. It could just be the spectacle through his spectacles, but I do like how the rationale is that he can still make it to the Queen to fulfill his duties if he humors the giant.
The Doorknob seemed like the more levelheaded individual through this animated version so I do see him more readily joining up. And the Dodo is zany enough to go along. Bill just flat out being exhausted by his trip and resting along was a good fit. I am glad he is alright all things considered!

The mention of her chest filling and her outfit shrinking was different, no such emphasis was made in the previous chapter. Was this going to have some additional roll here or possible prep for a setup for a future chapter preparing the reader for other things that can happen to Alice?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the course of events I laid out for the White Rabbit, the Dodo and Bill the Lizard.  I prefer happy endings as opposed to tragic ones in the stories I create and the ones I read.  As far as Alice's physical developments regarding her figure, it was somewhat spur of the moment as I was typing it out.  I was trying to make her appear more sexy and majestic as she grew, though I didn't want to go too far into X-rated territory with the descriptions as I was writing it.  I was aiming for a sort of benevolent goddess in her overall character, powerful but gentle all the same.

Sorry to get your hopes up, but each of these chapters is a one-shot, so there won't be any interconnection between them.  Basically imagine watching the 1951 film as it is, then imagine a fork in the narrative road, so to speak.  I like to put a lot of detail into the growth process for Alice, then figure where the story will take off once she increases in size while maintaining her overall character.  That was my intention with this little project.  Hopefully, that won't turn you off to the remaining chapters once I've posted them.

In any case, I appreciate that you enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2021 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I really liked this chapter - as I often imagined as a kid, both watching one of the many film versions or reading the novel, what if she downed the whole box?

Granted, more often I thought about Alice interacting with the White Rabbit trying to protect it's carrots and she not taking a bite off the Carrot, but instead eats the Rabbit and the Carrot both at once, just after the Rabbt exclaimed "Aber nicht mich, du Gierschlund!" (But not me, you glutton!")

Come to think of it that probably was my earliest Vore Fantasy...

 

Regardless, I really liked what you did to the Wonderroom Scene even if "cutting" the sea of tears is a massive (no pun intended) deviation.

I am a little sad that this will be strictly based on the Disney Movie as I like the "giant" Puppy Scenes quite a lot and Alice growing and ripping out the mean Flowers from the garden would be quite satisfying as well.

But instead of "mourning this loss"; I will rather look forward to to Alice growing within(or maybe even out off) the House of the Royal Announcer and especially the End of the Trial.

On a more general note: You really hit the personalisaton of the characters well in your original scenes (at least so far). As Characters often kinda "derail" in the realms of Fanfiction this is really worth praising.

So feel praised now! That's order 42, the oldest in the book! ;)



Author's Response:

I appreciate the enthusiasm in your review.  The 1951 film was something of an inspiration for me and got me into the gts realm from an early age.  I try to keep Alice generally peaceful in how she interacts with other characters she meets in Wonderland, hence the rating I gave this story.  I don't want to outright give away the plot of each chapter, but I'm trying to find a way to have it end with Alice remaining a giantess in some way that might be at least somewhat plausible within the story's universe.

Also, I appreciate the praise regarding the character personalisation you brought up.  In matters of fanfiction, where the author basically deviates from the original story and goes down a unique path, it feels somewhat of a gamble in how the creator of the story portrays the characters and how they would react in a way that appears generally in line with their personality.  So I'm glad you like the path I decided to go down in this version of the Alice in Wonderland story.

Reviewer: Acrophite Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

Wow, did you a splendid job here! Captures the feel of the original book, and I'm very excited to see where you go with it!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I try to commit to the film as much as I can before I decide to take over the story.  The movie is what got me interested in the gts genre, so I felt like trying my hand at writing something based off of an early childhood inspiration so to speak.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

 I hope we will see alternate endings to the rabbit house scene and trial. I kind of wish she had just burst through the house instead of just being stuck there. Maybe she grows and sneezes so hard she actually sends the White Rabbit flying. 

In the trial she could remain a giant and proceeded to humiliate the Queen as  she intended.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm hoping to do a chapter for each scene in the film, so four altogether.  And yeah, I'm gonna try to have her stay a giant in each one.  It's just a matter of getting creative in where I choose to deviate from the film and take the story down my own hypothetical path is where it gets tricky.  At least it'll feel tricky for me as I type it out.

Reviewer: WhydoIhave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I was a big fan of the old Alice in Wonderland when I was younger. This story was pretty faithful to the original, and I loved the reactions of the characters. I love the caring nature of Alice when she tries to apologize to the doorknob.

 

I do hope to see more of this story, and would like to see where you would take it in the next chapter. I hope there might be more moments with her feet (playful or unaware) in the future, but its just a suggestion. Good luck with the story.



Author's Response:

I appreciate that.  I'm somewhat of a slave for details, so I watched the scene several times over trying to get as much detail into the story as possible.  I also wanted to maintain Alice's overall behavior in the film while going down a different road.  Figured she would still be the same curious, yet considerate young lady as she was portrayed in the Disney film.

I'll try for more one-shots in this story, though they won't be interconnected with each other (obviously).  Basically they will commit to the original movie up until a certain point when I take a gamble and enter into the realm of hypothetical.  Anyway, thanks for the encouragement.

Reviewer: tostitos Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 12 2021 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Doorknob Episode

I was hoping someone who knew their way around the keyboard and had a way with words would make such a story. The ever present "what ifs" that I entertained when I saw the movie now being put to print.
Thanks for trying your hand at this and I do hope you do manage the rest/more.

It was faithful up until this version of Alice opted to not cry an outright pool and still stayed within the voices of the characters afterward. I was entertained by the descriptions and how Alice tried to make amends.

Though the Doorknob can't very well see the world from his newfound position tucked away. I would think he would be on her shoe like a buckle or in her hair in her bow or tied somehow. The shoe would jostle though, and the crown of her head would just afford him a view of the sky - which is still more than the walls and ceiling and floor he was bound to.

 



Author's Response:

It was something of a gamble from the point Alice became a giant.  I gave it a thought over about what might happen if she ate more than one "Eat Me" cake in this scene.  Given the circumstance of her growth, the cake box would be somewhere in front of her, given what was seen in the film, so if she simply searched for it and had another cake, what might possibly happen?  Given that I preferred a large Alice compared to a small one, I tried to end this one-shot with her staying a giant (in this case a bigger giant).

As for the Doorknob, I tried to figure what to do with him once Alice outgrew the hallway.  Given her propensity to apologize when she believes she has done wrong, I figured she would bring him along as a companion of sorts to make up for her growth.  Since she has placed other items in her apron in the Disney film, I figured that would be an easy enough place to store him on her journey.

Thanks for the enouragement and I'll see what I can come up with in future chapters.

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