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Reviewer: DrManhattan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2009 12:23 PM Title: Getting to know her

Wow, thanks for adding the next chapter so quickly. I was sure you were going to leave us hanging for a while.

There's a lot to like in this chapter. The thing that sticks out to me, though, is how you convey the characters' feelings with actions instead of just words. This is difficult to do, but you pull it off quite well. Hell, even when the characters are in dialog, there's meaning behind their words. Very well done.

It was nice to see Bobby stabilze his relationships all around. He's way to stressed out to be isolated. I'm curious to see what tactic he employs to find out Jen's brithday wish.

Please keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2008 11:30 AM Title: Getting to know her

I'm beginning to suspect that Jen was actually born mortal, and somehow _turned into_ a fairy. Albeit, wingless.

Let's see whether or not chapter 3 proves me right.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2008 8:30 PM Title: Getting to know her

Another very fun and good chapter.

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