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Reviewer: WhydoIhave Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2021 12:11 PM Title: The meeting

Its an okay start, maybe add some more action in it as well as make it a bit longer. This story has a lot of potential you just need to add more to it, and have some kind of a basis for the story. Like some more background other than its your job. Anyways good luck with the story.

Reviewer: supernatural Signed star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2021 2:10 PM Title: The meeting

There are a few grammar errors, but it could be a good start. 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2021 8:16 PM Title: The meeting

What in the world is this formatting.

Reviewer: Goddessruler Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2021 7:22 AM Title: The meeting

The first 100 words are just repeating the description on the page. Nothing of real interest happens. Could've been a good part of a chapter but is too little for a chapter on its own

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