Date: September 22 2021 12:19 AM Title: Thoughts to Paper
That's the most likely way the rest of the story goes since we are in the denouement. I'd accept that if it wasn't for my old friend Ensign Chekov... I mean Anton Chekhov.
Chekhov's gun demands that something be done with the voice telling Evie that she's still Eva.
It was small enough in the previous chapter to not even get a line of dialogue. It could have been a throwaway If left at that. It's in force in this chapter until Tina pays attention.
Likewise, the last few chapters have shown the was in Tina between her evil
and her guilt/concern.
And, Tina makes Eva promise to behave.
That's just this chapter.
I'll be disappointed when none of those ducks hunt. The story could have and probably should have ended in the previous chapter if that's all there is to it. It's too well written for 3 superfluous chapters.
Date: September 21 2021 12:18 AM Title: Thoughts to Paper
At this point, it looks like Tina and Eva will have a sex scene, and Eva will stay Tina's pet indefinitely. Amy will continue to observe Eva. I was just thinking that we might be in the denouement, because there isn't enough story left for another climax.
Author's Response:
You caught me for the next chapter haha. Well played.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2021 2:12 AM Title: Thoughts to Paper
I've given up trying to figure this story out. Who hurt you asterisk? /s Blink with one eye if you need help.
Dana clearly isn't coming to the rescue though. Every chapter where nebulously large amounts of time pass (weeks, months, years?)and we haven't seen any action from Dana despite Amy putting it together immediately, is starting to strain credulity a bit for me. At this point, I can only imagine she figured it out and decided to throw Eva under the bus for the company. How much time has passed anyway?
Is Tina about to do something stupid? Making Eva promise to behave sounds like she's about to do something stupid. Please let her do something stupid. It already seems like Tina is having Eva larger than 1 inch while at work if Eva can type on a tablet. A one inch woman wouldn't be large enough to reach further than the space bar on any touch keyboard I've ever seen.
Can we just have the last 2 chapters? This is torture.
Author's Response:
Okay, that got a pretty real laugh out of me.
For your own sanity I will say we are in the denoument as it were, so very firmly in the wrapup phase. Also, a big reason why Amy was able to piece it together is she works directly with the technology and noticed some irregularities. The same cannot be so easily said for others.
Just a couple more chapters and I'll stop being coy haha, I promise.