You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2021 7:38 PM Title: Lab Rat

Eva's perspective ends by calling Tina "Miss Tina". It's subtle, and yet tells so much.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2021 6:36 AM Title: Lab Rat

Very good how you keep these transitions in behavior interesting and believable. That keep the story great. And the logitics are very interesting.

I love these subtle uncomfortable feelings Amy and Tina have in the background and interesting to see this develop over time. Very good wrting in that part again.

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2021 7:49 PM Title: Lab Rat

Exciting stuff again. Looking forward to the continuation of this journey.

 

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.