Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2021 9:07 PM Title: The Other Side

What make your story so interesting is the details in feelings, motives, the detailed logistics.
Too many writers make stuff completely too easy for one party with out consequences for actions, but you go in depth how this would feel for the characters and that they also have to deal with real life.

The love the see the passage of time and how the people at work will react too and when she is gone missing long.

I like that Tina is a good fine girl and exploring this creative path finding the sweet spot of dishing out humiliating punishment. Their banter was already interesting and good timing. Even the smallest actions have subtle consequences, good nuances. Its is going to be an interesting game inside Tina's house, at work and outside as the passsage of time makes it more interesting.

 

Author's Response:

Very flattered to hear that! A lot of this definitely focuses on the reasoning and impact of decisions. To the point I often worry if there's enough Size in this Size Story, but people seem to like it and that makes me glad.