[Report This]Date: May 29 2021 3:47 PM Title: Restraint
Very good, would wonder if Tina decides to look up online all the things a giatness can do to a tiny so she can plan for for things to do to Eva. See how a tiny person works as an insol, is it better in wedges boots or flats etc., dress Eva up idall cloths if she had any, see how long she lats while inserted and Tina just going about her day. Or shrink some other items, like som used car in junk yart of something, just to see how crushing works, as much as the durability is notably increased. And of coude have Evainside whille its happening. Or a to be demolished house she can shink and make Eva smaller to fit in it and try stuff with.
Also think you might have had intended to post something today on the 29th, when the last one got posted on 27th, so maybe you missed something.
[Report This]Date: May 27 2021 7:48 PM Title: Restraint
Again, very good writing.
I love this subtle smart interaction, smart nuances. There is a lot of thought put into it so far and I love it.
The whole setting is interesting. Many things play a factor, but I won't mention it to ruin the fun for others. Its an interesting game and I find Tiny an interesting character as how she behaves. Realistic thinking about every action she takes and what it means and the feelings. Eva unpurposly behaves just in a way that makes it diffucult for Tina. Not getting the kind of type of control or satisfaction that she wants.
Her sense of justice and lust for this new sensation are struggeling constantly. Super al these smart nuances throughout the whole story with these characters.
Thanks for doing your best and putting much tought and effort in your story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, it's nice to hear feedback like that. I worry a lot about the finer details in this story haha.