Date: April 23 2021 9:00 AM Title: Unexpected Turn
1) Don't think we're losing patience! We like a story that's more than cheap porn; proper character development in a full beginning makes the middle and end of the story that much more satisfying.
2) "If karma strikes, it'll be interesting to see a now giant Tina interact with a lil Miss Eva."
"The story of a domineering business woman and her meek assistant in a series of events that will forever change them both."
It just hit me that Asterisk only said that their lives will change, and didn't say how...
3) I bet that Eva assumes that Tina is meek and submissive because Tina engineers things when Eva isn't looking, and that's there's a world of schemes we don't know about because Eva's the POV character.
Date: April 22 2021 10:08 PM Title: Unexpected Turn
Turnabout karma with timid Tina would've been impressive enough. But now we know Tina's a swole mini-amazon. If karma strikes, it'll be interesting to see a now giant Tina interact with a lil Miss Eva. A mixture ofmeasured punishment at first with some "learn yoour lessons, clean up your act" I'd imagine. I can see Tina breaking Eva down before building her back up.
Author's Response:
No commento, but I will say I'm happy to see you speculating! Been looking forward to how folks would react to that Tina reveal.