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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2021 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 34 Life hangs in the balance

I wonder about what kind of accident. Good emotional stuff. 

 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2021 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 34 Life hangs in the balance

I thought you might take this angle at some point. Ik it's not ver nice if me, but I think her passing away is better for the story. It'll add much-needed depth and allow the more important characters to develop that much further.

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