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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2021 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

Just caught up on this story. Good fight scene. I like that she tricked Bargar into causing his own demise. A clever and poetic victory. I'm curious how things will play out with Shalmat though.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm happy you liked the outcome of the fight, I didn't want it to just be the standard kind of thing you usually find in fantasy stories.

Reviewer: Acrophite Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2021 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

Finally got around to catching up on this. Loving it so far! Wasn't sure what to think about a prequel/sequel, but it sure does add a lot to the world and to Valerie and Alban pre-parenthood. I wonder if this story will end with her learning she is pregnant with Belena?



Author's Response:

That might happen, but I'm not sure myself. We'll both have to wait and see!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2021 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved the interaction between Valerie and Alban. He sleeps on top of her chest every night? I hope she doesn't toss and turn much.



Author's Response:

Usually she doesn't, but since it happened tonight, Alban might sleep apart from her for a while until the nightmares stop coming.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2021 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Whoa, giant mystically controlled armor! Nice! Kind of like a fantasy-style mech suit. Does Bargar have any kind of protection on that platform or is he just exposed to the open air? Seems like that could be an issue.



Author's Response:

He is pretty well protected from arrows shot from ground-level, since he's standing in the middle of the platform. Valerie could try firing an arrow at him, but he's a pretty small target for her to hit, and she's not very good with a bow either. But as to how she'll try to defeat him, you'll just have to wait and see!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2021 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

So our antagonists are introduced. Interesting to see what happened to the man Valerie flicked away and the consequences of that simple action on her part.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2021 9:02 AM Title: Prologue

I'm excited to see a new chapter of the Vandan series. Always a sucker for gentle giantess stories with a fantasy setting. Interesting that this one focuses on Valerie rather than her kids, who featured in some of the others.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you'll enjoy this one too! I felt that Valerie didn't get enough time in the other stories, since they focused more on the kids, which kinda pushed her to the side. I also wanted to see more of her and Alban starting out on their own.

Reviewer: wordUP Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2021 7:01 PM Title: Prologue

First of all, you don't know how jazzed I am that you're continuing this series; my favorite in the genre by a significant margin. You have a gift for writing and developing characters. I'm grateful that you're sharing it with us here. This new story is off to a great start and I hope you are inspired to keep them coming.



Author's Response:

I'm very happy you enjoy these stories, and I hope you'll like this new one as much as the older tales! I will try and not take too long between chapter updates, which has always been a problem for me in the past, but seeing how much people like this story and its chracters does help to motivate me.

Reviewer: timeturner Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2021 6:25 PM Title: Prologue

Love the Vandan series, you've been killing it here and on Deviantart lately



Author's Response:

Thanks, I appreciate the support!

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