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Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2021 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Three Groups

I have honestly enjoyed this story from beginning to end! The plot was so different yet fit the tone of this world! Thank you for not making this too dark or gross!!

If you finished I wouldn't be mad,but please write a wedding ceremony for our hero Paul and his queen,Linda😊😊 They make such a lovely couple and you put all the seeds there showing that they'll spend the rest of their lives together in this growing world. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I have thought about doing a kind of sequel picking up in the future when Paul and Linda are married and raising their own children. But I don't have anything definite planned.

Reviewer: tra xanh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2021 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Three Groups

Nice writing style! Pleasant to read and with some good humor sprinkeled in.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2021 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Three Groups

This is a phenomenal story. Hope you keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Its been enjoyable to write. 

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