[Report This]Date: September 17 2008 3:22 AM Title: Szenario.
Nice start, I look forward to seeing more.The president choking on a biscuit is pretty funny.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to read that - I was fearing this prelude would make readers frown =D It's pretty awkward when you think that some readers might be jerking off to the light-hearted story you are going to write, so this is something of an "Achtung - you won't get aroused from this story!" xD Joking apart, I'll try my best to keep it up - cheers!
Date: September 14 2008 11:20 PM Title: Szenario.
I like this story! Keep up the good work, hopefully Borja and Lyniamscia fall in love. How do you pronounce her name.
Author's Response:
Indeed, the premise asks for a romance. It's a quite discommoding situation, since my idea was making a slice of life story; this makes the story an absurdity. Though, I will try my best with this, since I'm really looking forward to go past the 2nd chapter in a Gts. story attempt =D Regarding the giantess' name - I made it up on the go. I'd pronounce it as it is written.
I'm really glad you liked this start. Cheers!