Reviews For Deliverance
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Reviewer: jmnzs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2023 10:01 PM Title: Epilogue

only now I finnally took time to read this absolute MASTERPIECE. not only the actual fetish stuff was well done, but it simply became an actual novel that made everyone stay for the story

congratulations on writing this story, I've read books that didn't let me so anxious and curious like this one did, I can't imagine how I'd be when having to wait for almost 2 years just to read what happens next.

only thing is I wish we were told about what happened to characters like Ruiwen (my favorite for sure, but I still liked her open  ending), Xiangling, Kovit and how they dealt with Jade.

I can imagine Xiangling got arrested for Amrita's doings which she was heavily responsible for, really tought she'd be the one to actually bring Grace back to the light (specially since she was still big by the end), but I don't think Kovit deserved being arrested since he was just a driver and such?

10/10 story either way

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 2:31 AM Title: Epilogue

If they're not careful, that ending will lead to a less-than-empty nest nine months from now.  LOL!

Masterfully poignant epilogue.  Thanks, again, for sharing this.  :-)


Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2022 1:31 AM Title: Epilogue

Excellent conclusion! Can’t wait to see how things play out in future one shots and/or continuations.


In the meantime, any plans to update Act of Gods?

Reviewer: lightwing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2022 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue

When I first found this story, I was pleased that it seemed to be a gentle story about a woman protecting tiny people from other giants who would harm them.  Over time, the story became a full blown novel and what a ride it has been.  It had super powered women and size stuff, both things I enjoy, and combined the two for even more enjoyment.  It had intrigue, lore, great storytelling, and hooked my interest more in the plot than the fetish stuff, though the fetish stuff certainly enhanced it.

Amazing job Kardo.  I hope you continue to write because your stories are gems, enjoyable and interesting both from a fetish perspective and story perspective.

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