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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2022 12:48 PM Title: Premature Celebration

First off, I love the chapter title.  Suitably punny!

Secondly?  I agree with Jisoo and Eren's sentiments. Some karmic payback will still probably be necessary by the first anniversary of the Post-Amrita Compromise (or whatever you ultimately choose to call it).  As a one-year time limit would inherently seem to necessitate Suji performing an even bigger miracle than Jisoo did with the shrinking of the Amrita's governing inner circle!

Last, but not least; I could be wrong. But, I think that there was one sentence that should have read "It wouldn't be fair _not_ to give people at least some time to change..."




Author's Response:

If there's anybody who can work a miracle it's definitely Suji (Baochai Fang) but yeah Jisoo definitely sees this as just humoring her younger sister to avoid an argument, and also it let's her deal with her own personal business without worrying about a Second Diminution. Jisoo is a pretty big pessimist and sees the worst in people before she sees the good, but recently she's started to interact with people in more positive perspectives in an attempt to rectify that (such as her friendly chats with Yulan and Amy in previous chapters), whereas Suji is a selective optimist who believes everybody except her family members can be given a second chance and deserve the benefit of the doubt. 

We'll see how Suji's efforts pan out in the future but for now she's definitely got the odds stacked against her. And yes that was another mistake you caught! These last few chapters have me writing at a mile a minute out of excitement, definitely a few more spelling/grammar errors popping up now lol. 

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