Reviews For Deliverance
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2022 1:44 AM Title: Alternate View

Whew!  Where'd I leave that pitcher of ice water?



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; )

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2022 9:32 PM Title: Alternate View

Hoo boy, I'll have to bookmark this chapter ... for no particular reason.

I do like that there's some pushback against such a radical, world-altering idea. Often times, radical, quick, implements tend to end in disaster. It's good that Jisoo wants to pace the changes, but sometimes, you have to have the mindset that things can always get worse, and sometimes, the best thing to do is nothing. The cure can inflict more harm than the disease.

Of course, look forward to her to be on the hunt for some Amita troublemakers, which is probably the best course of action for her. We'll see how the conflict within her plays out, and I suspect Eren will play a large role in that decision.

And speaking of Eren, all those trials and suffering was worth it, as we can see by the end of the chapter. Going from torture by Grace, to being "attended to" by Jisoo. Perfectly balanced.



Author's Response:

Perfectly balanced, as all things should be.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2022 12:54 PM Title: Alternate View

Jisoo shrinks humanity and their cities and immediately fucks them over to weather and giant animals and insects. I hope she doesn't go with that idea lol



Author's Response:

Suddenly the most terrifying threat becomes all the hungry stray cats lmao

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2022 8:15 PM Title: Alternate View

A sweet chapter with some wholesome lewd fun, the best kind.  Jisoo's power-up has also made her sexier in my opinion.  All that magic power on top of everything else and she's still so sweet, caring, and playful with Eren.  Giant, super powered girlfriend > regular giant girlfriend.



Author's Response:

For real, there's a whole new world of fun shenanigans that can be explored when stuff like magic exists!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2022 4:07 AM Title: Alternate View

Another great chapter. Can’t wait to see how this one ends!


As for Act of Gods, totally understand if you want to finish your current stories first. Great to hear a return may happen at some point though



Author's Response:

I look forward to getting to that point!

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