Reviews For Deliverance
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2022 11:59 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 2

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Jisoo for the nick-of-time.



Author's Response:

It was the biggest deus ex moment of the story by far!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2022 7:14 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 2

Fall from Grace indeed.  This story is intensifying and I love it!  The fact that Grace is hearing her inner conscience is a good sign but it seems a bit late for her at this point.  And good on Maeve and Eren for breaking the brainwashing.  You'd better keep them safe this time Jisoo!

I can feel we're headed to big events in the story now.  Jisoo and Grace confrontation, Maddie and Ruiwen on their way, Operation Deliverance happening soon, the Amrita branches doing their own plots, I can't wait!



Author's Response:

At the end of a slow burn there should always be a cathartic explosion that makes the build-up even more worth it, and things are going to get really intense in the next few chapters! It's a lot of things happening all at once but fortunately things will become a bit more streamlined for the primary characters for the remainder of the story, with less jumping around between different pov's. 

I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2022 7:15 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 2

That was... Amazing. Never mess with a xian goddess and her friends. 

Author's Response:

I've been looking forward to this arc of the story for months and I'm so happy to finally have it out! Thank you for the continued feedback!

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