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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2022 2:21 PM Title: Ramifications

It looks like I was right.  There is a schism brewing along racial lines within the 9-tailed fox community!  With the Northern Chinese branch serving the Japanese branch as subordinate co-conspirators.*


 * A la World War II-era Manchuria when it was actually a puppet kingdom briefly renamed "Manchukuo."

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2022 8:32 AM Title: Ramifications

I know Grace is brainwashed too. But I dislike weaklings who cannot think for themselves follow things blindly as a cult, 

I can understand certain things, but the moment you become so blind for things. When thinking about thinking stops, than you become something less than a human, let alone a higher being.

I hope you have a mentally painfull punishment for her in mind that is double as bad than she dished out. Not short, but so much pain and torture that even her victims would feel sorry for her.

Good writing.




Author's Response:

Grace is in a way, a product of the same system that Jisoo went through to become the monster she is now. Whether or not she's past the point of no return is something for the readers to determine for themselves, since she's absolutely a ego-maniacal murderer with a god complex who sees all humans as being equally worthless. However she also views human-on-human violence as being horrific, since she believes as a god she is the only person who is allowed to end another person's life. How someone can overcome that kind of brainwashing is a great inquiry.

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