Date: February 07 2022 10:31 PM Title: Revocation
Well this chapter started dark. I recall another story with similar kitchen scene, only that was told from the perspective of the tiny humans being prepared. Anyway, it's kind of amusing to me that Grace will happily eat specks alive and whole but becomes squeamish when she sees them butchered like that in the sushi or would have to bite the live ones in half rather than swallow them whole. Seems like her conditioning missed a spot.
And Jisoo. Oh my, she really screwed up here didn't she. But at the same time, and the other reviews mentioned this, she was brainwashed and Eren is causing it to come undone. Also, I foresee a fight between Grace and Jisoo. Grace firmly believes in the cause and loves Jisoo but Jisoo's having second thoughts thanks to Eren. On another note, it looks like the Buddha has a surprise for everyone.
This story has become a full length novel and I love every bit of it.
Author's Response:
I believe that story you are referring to may be one of Inwiththebook's stories perhaps, it was about an elven establishment that served humans as food! That was definitely the inspiration for the opening of this chapter and an opportunity to write hard vore. Exciting news is that at some point the two sushi chefs may get their own spin-off story, nothing is concrete obviously but its very likely.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2022 8:49 AM Title: Revocation
It was clear from almost the beginning when she would have these flashbacks, that Jisoo was brainwashed. These thoughts were constantly there and came more to the surface as time progressed. That was her real inner self speaking, her conscious so suppressed.
I like this story. It has some similarities with my stories when it comes to different viewpoints of groups of characters and a subtle overarching story.
Who is good or bad is for the reader to decide, although in your story it is clear where the arrogant villains can be found.
I think Jisoo is lied to and what is done to her is awful. Like in the movie "Wanted" where the group of assassins let the new guy think he is hunting the killer of his father when it is revealed that the so-called killer was his father. That was the feeling I got from Jisoo when she had those constant flashbacks of feeling guilt.
Author's Response:
That is a very astute observation! Her 'real self' has surfaced occasionally and given her hesitation in the past, but now that history is repeating itself with her Eren mimicking what happened to her adoptive sister, it's now much stronger than ever and causing her internal conflict. There's one more piece to the puzzle however which comes out next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 06 2022 4:03 AM Title: Revocation
Oh, wow. What chapter. It is just as I imagined. Those feelings of Eren finally erupted when he found out about Maddie. Jisoo sentenced Maddie to a life of being Riuwen's pet and that was finally the straw that broke the camel's back. Jisoo had to get drunk in order to hurt Eren. It's amazing, after all that those two felt together for Jisoo it was more important her "Heavenly Duties" than the person she once loved. It's hard for me to believe right now that Jisoo has feelings for Eren. As always said that woman is a very contradictory character.
But, also as always the suspense. That "golden flash" that launched the Buddha statue on Jisoo that knocked her down. Oh wow that was unexpected. In the previous chapter, Jisoo's sister or mother was seen in front of a Buddha statue, meditating. Umm what a mystery hahaha just as I expected from the end of this chapter. Well, nothing. To wait for the next one.
Kardo, side note, I saw on the Discord channel that you had some health problems with Covid-19. I just hope you get better soon friend and I don't know if it will help you much but they say that Omicron (the variant of coronavirus that is circulating now) is more virulent but less aggressive than Delta. I also had coronavirus although it only lasted a week in which I was asymptomatic and treated with Interferon. Good health and thanks again for not discontinuing this work. I know you're going to great lengths to bring this to us.
Author's Response:
I greatly appreciate your concern for my health! I had the omicron variant which has given me a very persistent cough which restricts my ability to speak properly. This chapter took so long to come out mostly because I was recovering for quite some time; it hit me harder than most other omicron cases do. But not to worry I should be back to normal and able to write at the normal schedule once again of every one to two weeks on weekends!