Reviews For Deliverance
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2022 6:17 AM Title: Reduction

Poor Maddie!  I had so hoped she'd be exempt from the attempt on Giulia's life.  And a killer half-sister?!  I definitely didn't see that coming. 


Brilliant! Makes me wish I could score you an eleven.  



Author's Response:

So maybe it’s revealing to much but I don’t see the harm in clearing up confusion. That woman was actually her complete biological sister, not half-sister. But lots of people bit the bait and thought was Keqing! I wonder if she will show up soon if at all?

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2022 9:17 PM Title: Reduction

1. Poor Giulia.

2. Poor Maddie!

3. Poor Maeve.

4. Jisoo is in several kinds of trouble. Her goddess complex was ripped apart, she learned a game changing revelation, and Eren was on video call with Maddie when she was shrunk so there's no hiding that from him.  Combined with what Satsuki was saying about Amrita corp. having dark, dirty secrets and Jisoo straight up admitting she loves being a monster, there will be consequences!

I don't know how you do it but every chapter leaves me even more excited for the next one.



Author's Response:

I sometimes feel bad about the weekly release schedule which is not set in stone for this very reason, since cliffhangers are not very fun to wait for! But that tension is part of the appeal of the story, each chapter makes you really want the next one 

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2022 10:43 PM Title: Reduction

Ah fuck, I knew this was coming but I still hoping that Maddie would get away unscathed. Now I have this sinking feeling in my stomach. I just hope theres a way to reverse the formula because her company has turned into the only light of hope for specks in this novel. 



Author's Response: Maddie is a smart enough character to have put up a very good fight before it happened though! Only Thomas was that resilient before her.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2022 1:22 PM Title: Reduction

Oh, wow. Hell, exactly what I feared the most happened. Again I felt sad about what happened to Maddie. I've only felt that way in this story and it was when the speck commune was destroyed. I don't have to say that Maddie doesn't deserve something like that, not to mention that Giulia doesn't either. Really Amrita co. it's corrupt. Surely, humanity in this story has a lesson to learn but Jisoo is... well let's just say she's a contradictory character. I come back and I repeat I would not like Maddie to suffer something like slavery at the hands of that crazy Riuwen. Her projects and feelings are very noble. Someone like her doesn't deserve something like that. But I guess Eren will figure it out in time. Everything is in the hands of our literary master Kardo.

Amazing story, dude. It's been a long time since I read a story as good, emotional and deep as this one. The emotions from the beginning until the end are something out of the ordinary without counting the suspense in each chapter that makes you keep reading until the end. Thanks again Kardo for sharing this wonderful story on this site.



Author's Response:

I greatly appreciate the kind words!

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