[Report This]Date: December 28 2021 2:49 PM Title: Recuperate
Oh, dear! Either Nang Yai is planning to "Thai" one on with these soon-to-be-shrunken soldiers , as soon as she's off-duty. Or else she's working "hand-in-glove" with Keqing!
Author's Response: I love these puns!
Date: December 26 2021 12:14 PM Title: Recuperate
To coincide with the Lunar New Year, the military would host a parade in Beijing.
The author does not seem to understand the meaning of this festival to China. This holiday for China is similar to Christmas in European and American countries. The leader delivered a New Year message, and the people ate dumplings at home. Even the military will uniformly make and eat dumplings on this day. Most government agencies and almost all companies suspended their work on this day. During the day on this day, people need to visit relatives and friends (this is not an option but a mandatory option, otherwise they will be regarded as alienated from each other), and in the evening they need to eat together and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. In other words, no one has time to watch the military parade on this day.
Author's Response:
Ah that is very good to know! This is the dangers posed when you write a story which is largely based in another culture, of which I lack a good chunk of knowledge. With this in mind I will absolutely edit this most recent chapter in the final few paragraphs to correct this mistake and be sure to have that fixed before the next update. I greatly appreciate the chance to learn more about Chinese cultural practices and wouldn’t want to make such massive mistakes again so it is awesome to have someone able to correct them! In the future if any similar issues are noted I would be delighted to see where I can improve as well.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2021 8:16 AM Title: Recuperate
I love the deep story and revenge stuff.
One problem seems to occur now. They are all equally cruel and dishonest, therefor what her mother did doesn't have weight for me. I don't feel bad for Jisoo or Grace who themselves would not hesitate to kill a person like Suyin if they got the order or just on a whim.
Jisoo turned against her own family which is already a betrayal. The personalities at that company are so annoying now that I actually root for her mother.
I'm curious how this will develop. If there is anything I dislike, it is those big corporations who preach about morality and what is good for humanity and the world.
Author's Response:
The Amrita Corporation is incredibly wealthy and powerful, and definitely feel that their powers grant them to ability to dictate what all others do, they don’t exactly practice what they preach!