Giantess World
Reviews For Deliverance
Reviewer: kenrios Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2021 2:26 AM Title: Relief
Author's Response:
Date: November 17 2021 2:26 AM Title: Relief
Well, let's see how that "conversation" unfolds. I do not know why I have the slight impression that many things will develop from the development of that conversation that will change the relationship between those two.
Author's Response:
We will most certainly find out!
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed 
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Date: November 16 2021 2:14 PM Title: Relief
Author's Response: I am very happy to hear that, I wanted the reader to have a bit of a more relaxed chapter for a while since the past several have almost all been major twists and turns. However at the end to ease into this new phase of the story, I am happy the tension was built very well! Thank you for the kind words as always!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2021 2:14 PM Title: Relief
"We now bring this latest meeting of the Mile-High Club to order so that we may welcome our newest 'member.' "
Sorry, Kardo. I couldn't resist. :-)
Let's just say that it was masterful the way you relieved reader suspense with the first half of this chapter. Only to rebuild with the last sentence or two before the cliff-hanger! Further indisputable evidence that you're excelling as a story teller, here.
Author's Response: I am very happy to hear that, I wanted the reader to have a bit of a more relaxed chapter for a while since the past several have almost all been major twists and turns. However at the end to ease into this new phase of the story, I am happy the tension was built very well! Thank you for the kind words as always!