Reviews For Deliverance
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2021 4:08 AM Title: Reveal Part 2

You know, that's the mixed blessing of the kind of dramatic conversation Eren and Jisoo are going to have in the next chapter. The realization that all buried truths inevitably get exhumed. And, sometimes, sooner rather than later.

Author's Response:

Some truths are dug up and revealed, others only partially!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2021 3:43 AM Title: Reveal Part 2

Wooow.  When I first started reading this story, it was a "giant woman saves tiny man and protects him" sort of thing, which is great because I love gentle stories with a bit of a kick in them.  This story has gone far and above what I expected when I started reading and I quite like the tropes being explored.  Jisoo's "good but not soft" giant protector, Maddie's "dismissive of specks but realizes and regrets her mistakes", Grace's casual friendliess towards friends but ruthlessness towards those outside it.

And Eren. Poor boy has a lot to process now.  On another note, I'm guessing Jisoo's family's plan is to shrink everyone else in the world and rule over them as benevolent overlords.  That comes off as an idea that sounds nice but has a lot of unmentioned sacrifices along the way.  Those who resist, those who try to flee, those who can't cope with their new size, those who were shrunk while carrying something or operating vehicles, etc.  Though it depends on how the family intends to shrink everyone.  Then there's the matter of what happens if people find out they shrank the world.  Hard to be benevloent overlords when your subjects are rebelling and hate you.

Anyway, this story continues to be great.  I look forward to what you have planned next!



Author's Response:

An unmentioned casualty of the Diminution were all the people who shrunk in the middle of something very important. It would be very unfortunate if the pilot of a commercial air liner was to suddenly shrink and crash the entire plane, and that sort of stuff happened. An interesting point you bring up! And for the three main female characters those are very accurate descriptions of each. Jisoo is conflicted person who understands she isn't a good person by definition; she does bad things for the right reason. Maddie has underwent a bit of character development and knows what she has done is wrong and wants to be better. As for Grace she's definitely the most divisive character atm with a few people! She is a very friendly and kind woman to those close to her, but cruel towards those she considers her enemy.

 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2021 2:36 AM Title: Reveal Part 2

I wonder what revelations she will reveal to Erin. Is Jisoo the head of the family or a higher rank than Grace?

Because she decided upon herself without Grace's approval to end Grace's project that was interesting and fun to her.

 



Author's Response:

Yah she absolutely ruined Grace's pet project, especially after she went through so much trouble to acquire Thomas for herself.

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