Reviewer: Xinunar Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2021 3:14 AM Title: Reveal Part 1

That is a really good story. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: somerandomguy7 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2021 1:32 PM Title: Reveal Part 1

Nice, I always thought the whole situation with Thomas seemed to be resolved to easily. Like, he was literally the only obstacle left for any concrete problem that could cause complications with Jisoo and Eren's relationship, aside from the marriage process with all the traditions. 

This is going to complicate things, guess Jisoo is going to have to explain things earlier than expected. Which I know that Eren might struggle to accept. Or he could try and forget about it, but be more careful when talking to Grace and Jisoo, slowly feeling scared to be in their presence. That type of doubt might cause him to further inquire directly both of them on the situation, so I'm interested to see how this plays out.

Also, side note, can't believe someone would spend almost a billion dollars at a mall. At that point she should just buy the mall. I'm also interested to see if there's going to be a Franklin version that will now be used as well for the speck community. Keep up the good work! 

Author's Response:

So as for Lily (Grace's little sister) spending almost a billion dollars, the timeline this story is in as previouly mentioned in earlier chapters is in the 22nd century and there is a heavy amount of inflation. It is still a massive amount of money regardless of the era, but not quite as similar to how we envision it. Minimum wage in this world's USA is almost $50 for instance. 

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2021 5:38 AM Title: Reveal Part 1

One the one hand, good for Maddie helping people.  On the other hand, woo boy Eren found a doozy.  That's going to be awkward to explain.

Author's Response:

Probably a pretty awkward conversation right before their big trip too!