This is most plot heavy story I have ever read on this site, and I loved it!  All of the twists and turns in the story were great!

A couple of small points

1) Eren's role was really diminished at the end.   I mean I loved Jisoo throughout the whole story, but Eren was so dynamic in the beginning of the story, I was just a bit disappointed at the end that his role was even purposefully subverted because he would have wanted the diminuation?  (not sure that makes a lot of sense, but maybe having him more involved would have been more true to his character.)

2) When Jisoo gained all of her powers it would have been nice to see her take some small revenges on the worst of the worst people.    I know she was trying to deny she was a goddess, but come on, she totally was.

3) Jade's nanomachines were kind of forgotten, but they did touch Eren, and therefore when he was re-united with Jisoo they would have touched her.  I would have been fine with Jisoo seeing them and obliterating them with her godly powers, but it wasn't even mentioned.  Nor was Jade's fate particularly touched on either.  Maybe it would have been fun to have Jade try to control Jisoo in God mode, but have Jisoo obliterate the nanites, and turn them against Jade.

4) Eren and Jisoo's daughter was too "tame". I would have liked to have seen her enjoy her powers a bit more.  Not outright rebellion, but more like someone who wouldn't mind occasionally cheating on their diet.  I keep thinking about how the daughter might be a fun short story on her own.

5) The whole thing about Jisoo not being able to regrow people seemed a little far fetched when her power grew to be absolute.   I realize you wanted that for plot purposes, but maybe you should have just let it happen that way.

Despite these nits, I loved the story, really I did.  The only reason I mention these things is because of how much I got into the plot.  Really fun stuff!  If Eren had been more active at the end I would have given this a 10 out of 10.  I really viewed Jisoo and Eren as the two main protagonists of the story, and so that disappointed me a bit, but not enough to make this one of the best stories I have read here.

Just wanted to comment something I just remembered from your series about the immortal peach that increase a person size and strong couldn't mass reproduce them to return everyone to normal size people or at least Maddie who got her size Robbed from her , I mean all Maddie got to do is a eat a few immortal peaches and she be back to five foot nine inches tall in no time just My thoughts thinking about the immortal peach 🍑.

First of all I love this story, I do consider it to be the second best on this site after how to break in your pet.

    Now then I would actually be ok wish jissoo shrinking the rest of mankind, (as long as they do it in stages) this mankind really needs to humility.

    I am interested to see where this ends.  Also I know it’s not in her character any more, but I wouldn’t be opposed to jissoo keeping a few pets.

@Kardo I definitely knew there was some sort of anime inspiration in the story, but very interesting to see where it all came from. Thanks for elaborating!

As for Omega, I’d say Consequences is closest to Deliverance.  Would be cool to hear your thoughts on that one if you ever get around to reading it… As I said before, lots of striking similarities to this story  

Author's Response: I can't wait to check it out if that's the case, the Omegas series is probably the most consistently high-quality series on the website, and has been fleshed out very well!

Haven’t left a review up this point but this story is insane, it’s long since stopped being just a long erotica. I feel like I need to reread it to keep track of all the crazy details and twists, and overall it’s a great experience to be reading each new chapter when they release.

This is a doorstopper, that's for sure. I had to keep turning the page. Your story is very dynamic. At first, I thought it was some fun muscly murder-wife snuff and smut. Then, it turned into a giant conspiracy of another set of people who get drunk off of power. And that's the great irony you've masterfully set-up, the Amita's aren't any different than the human's they've condemned.

I admit that I felt Eren's character was a bit flat at first, he came across as a mere object for Jisoo's desires. It's late in the story that he fully develops as a character, and serves as a catalyst for Jisoo's change. He doesn't appear as murderous as that other Eren.

It's quite a tragic tale, particularly for Thomas, who was the character I was rooting for the most. He was resourceful, compassionate and reasonable. He was David facing off against Goliath, and it was sobering to see our David get crushed. It's necessary for the story, like Eddard Stark in GoT, but you just had to root for the man for his happy ending. Props on you for that, even though his sister was the punching bag for the first chapter.

Well that’s sounds a lot like people being people to deal with the situation and now erect finally sees Kirov for what she is and also what she could be someday, aka a monster but the kind of monster that keeps the other monsters away.  She very much deserved the mental anguish but damn if I know where u are going with this

Oh, wow. It seems that the moment of truth has arrived. Or at least the moment of part of the truth. Umm I liked the way Eren responded. He tacitly accepted Jisoo's proposal, but that woman is unpredictable. That woman... dropping the bomb right in the middle of that party, that was strong. I can't wait for the next chapter, let's see how this amazing conversation unfolds. Well that's assuming friend Kardo has mercy on us and tells us about it in the next chapter.

Okay, just finished reading the last chapter and I gotta say I kind of felt bad for Thomas and Wei. Grace is shaping up to be a monster herself. And also holy shit! The scene with the trash can was super disturbing. Almost made me consider dropping the story for my own sake.

Hello people. I have just read this story up to this point and I must say that it is extremely deep. It really touched my heart, because it deals with very interesting and very complex topics. Regardless of the GTS theme, this story touches on issues like what exactly defines us as human beings. In particular, the scene that struck me the most was that of the city of the little ones in the alley. The death of those children, women and men in such a cruel way, man that brought a tear to me. My mother was in my room and she asked me what was wrong with me. I told him it was just a story that I was reading and I passed it on to him. We then had an interesting conversation on these topics. What is it that makes us human beings or persons? Many times in history those simple facts are overlooked. What differentiates humans from animals? It seems obvious, human beings dominate the planet to a certain extent, but to my understanding it is not that. I think it's our reasoning, at least that's what the scientists say. But that capacity that humans have to feel love, morals, decency, ethics, sadness, human values r03;r03;in short ... I remember that a man I admire a lot named José Julián Martí Pérez said in one of his articles when observing the horrors of the Spanish colonial prisons in which a 12-year-old peasant boy had been sentenced to forced labor in the stone quarries said:
"Something inside me, and every honest man knew what it was, began to grow. 12 years, 12 years sounded in my head. 12 years old he was and the Spanish government put chains on him, 12 years old he was and the Spanish government sent him to the quarries to be destroyed. My heart wept with rage and helplessness. "
Although it seems like a somewhat pathetic quote, I would say that I felt the same as José at that time. When reading each scene of cruelty, I felt a chill thinking about the anguish, the sadness, the infinite pain of all those who lost people sometimes for similar reasons. Simply because they were different and at the mercy of others who had the power to harm them. For me the characters of Grace and Jisoo are a center of contradiction, on the one hand they claim that what they do they do with the purpose of saving the planet from humanity itself and on the other hand what I imagine implies the enslavement of it or at least submission to their company. I imagine that the way in which humanity will submit, in history, is implicit in the terror of what will happen if humanity rebels against its "goddesses". As Batman said to Robin (Damian Wayne), how do you intend to rule humanity without being part of it? Personally, I didn't think that the death of Thomas, Alice's brother, was the right thing to do on Jisoo's part. What kind of person would a brother blame for defending his sister? Much more when he promised it, is it that neither Grace nor Jisoo saw this? And so we see how they dehumanize themselves, becoming perhaps just as murderous as those who murdered for pleasure.
In short, excellent story, I really like it. I long to see how it will end. These stories that touch your heart are pleasant readings that make you think and on top of that you enjoy. Thanks for giving us your art in this way man and keep it up.

Author's Response:

That's a really beautiful quote and I think it is extremely fitting! I applaud the thoughtfulness of your feedback and am touched that you shared it and were able to have a good conversation about it afterwards!