Date: April 01 2021 8:38 PM Title: A Crisis
(I finally remembered to comment this, damn, my memory sucks. I digress). I'm genuinely surprised that the idea of Brian being tortured, psycholocially and physically abused and raped and him not needing therapy has been mentioned yet. Frankly I was surprised that it didn't happen when Allie first rescued him. Maybe its just my own experience, but anything remotely close to any of the multiple traumatic experiences Brian found himself in seemed grounds for immediate therapy sessions, or at least steps towards therapy and recovery. (I know, I know, within the realm of the story not a lot of doctors if any, would see him), but my concern remains the same. PTSD, depression, and existential crises require some sort of therapy... Take it from me.
Date: March 21 2021 11:59 PM Title: A Crisis
Bruh.
I really would like to just leave the review at that but I don't want it to seem like I didn't enjoy the chapter..! Albeit not what I expected (like everyone I think I was kind of hoping for more intimacy from brian's side as well) but I guess we'll have to see how this goes! Definitely a plot twist I wasn't expecting!
Also goddammit Allison your stupid "dom teasing" is literally working backwards just let the tiny dude take control it's not that hard to realize he might feel diminished if you go psycho horny mode on him
Regardless the chapter was pretty cool, not my favorite, but I still throughly enjoyed it! I just hope it doesn't take 5 chapters for Brian to regain his self and understand what's going on. And moreover I think we all hope we get to see allie and Brian actually explore brian's demisexuality a bit more, but I guess we'll see when that happens. I'll make sure to organize a community party when Brian and Allie manage to have sex after all!
Great writing as always!
And once again,
Bruh.
Author's Response:
I totally approve "bruh" as a response to this chapter. Yeah, it's a pretty big shift from the previous few chapters. That's definitely the intent! I've been trying to plant the seeds for this development throughout the story (even Chapter 1 foreshadows this event pretty hard), so hopefully it doesn't feel out of place. Glad you enjoyed it, though!
Yeah, Allison wasn't thinking clearly. It's important to remember that she was still slightly drunk, as well. She put her own enjoyment first, and it completely backfired.
Oh don't worry, it won't take that long for Brian to come back. I'm not interested in any kind of "amnesia" arc. It won't be right away either, though, so I hope you enjoy how the whole situation develops. And I'll be sure to look forward to your community party! (If I'm even invited, of course x_x)
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: March 21 2021 5:22 PM Title: A Crisis
Me after reading the first paragraph: FINALLY A FULL FANSERVICE CHAPTER LET'S GOOOOOO.
Me after reading the entire chapter: I'll proceed to f*cking KMS NOOOOOOOOOOOO.
Great chapter as always! <3
Author's Response:
I know, I'm so sorry to do you all dirty like that! I just think this story (and Brian) isn't quite ready to go sexual yet. Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed(?) it! I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter.
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: March 21 2021 3:18 PM Title: A Crisis
Another excellent chapter! This one succesfully broke my heart (I mean this in a good way). Its just a testament to how good you are at conveying emotion in your writing. I can't wait for the next installment. As always, I will hope for the best but prepare for the worst ;-;
Author's Response:
I'm glad that this chapter resonated emotionally with you, even if they aren't the happiest emotions! I really appreciate your kind words, and continued reviews. I hope you will enjoy where we go from here!
-Pluto
Date: March 21 2021 8:41 AM Title: A Crisis
So his sexual assaults during his prison years did become a mental trauma for him. I think given his size and circumstances, Allison really should stop with all the "ittsy-bitsy man" taunting, "I like making you feel trapped" and vulnerble statements, and just general sense of dominance she likes to exude on Brian when they try being intimate. Lady he had a bad reaction to just from you taunting him about his size and pushing your lips up against him and whispering "your so cute" just the other day. It should've been a little more clear that he's got bad history with forced sexual acts, and not being in control is a red flag for his psyche. He has the interest to be intimate with her, but she needs to let him be the initiator. Let him approach her body and decide the acts. We'll have to see how much of a wall of solitude Brian raises after this. If he's willing to be intimate with her again before a possible restoration, or if he can't be comfortable enough to approach her again like that without being her size equal.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: March 21 2021 3:46 AM Title: A Crisis
Shoulda went with a gift card.