Date: April 01 2021 7:59 PM Title: A Birthday Party
Yep, officially jealous of Brian. Other thsn that I want him and his sister to reunite and have a happy reunion. His mom can get bent for all I care...and yet, my personal experience makes me wonder if Brian's mom wasn't abused herself. The cycle of violence is a very real and dangerous phenomenon.
Date: March 18 2021 10:49 AM Title: A Birthday Party
I just love the way you keep on telling us you won't be updating frequently, and then proceed to update frequently!
While I feel like the last 2 chapters are kind of filler chapters, that doesn't mean I didn't throughly enjoy them!
Seeing Brian get more accustomed to Elizabeth and develop his emotions a bit further really goes a long way in connecting the reader to the characters! The demi-sexual part was a nice little touch to indicate that something can and probably will indeed happen between him and Allie sooner than later as well
I'm also really glad he had a blast at his birthday party, and I definitely cannot wait to see the next chapter, I'm sure your writing will do naughtly little Allie justice! We just have to wait and see how Brian is going to react to his little (or rather big...) present ^_^
Great work as always!
Author's Response:
I know! I keep telling myself that I'm not gonna write for a while, only to get restless within the next couple days and start again. What can I say, I'm having fun.
For sure, these chapters don't have a lot to do with the overarching SP plot. I decided to split this story into sections, and the chapter names are what separates them. The chapters starting with "The Big..." relate to the first meeting with Elizabeth, the ones with a word ending in "s" relate to Elizabeth's second visit and her reveal, and the recent ones starting with "A..." are ultimately about Brian's sexuality.
Still, I'm glad you're enjoying them! Yep, this present will absolutely elicit a big reaction from Brian. I hope you enjoy how it proceeds!
-Pluto