Reviews For An Innocent Man 2
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Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2021 7:24 PM Title: A Reconciliation

I'm glad this chapter brought up the topic of sexuality, it had been an underlying concern of mine between Brian and Allie. My concern was that the relationship would be one sided in the sense that Allie got off to Brian but not the other way around. I know asexuality exists, and I'm confident there is a reason for it biologically(my theory is evolutionary population control, I digress). At the same time, as a heterosexual person myself I prefer that happiness, sexual or otherwise, to be as mutual as possible. Arousal and sexual gratification are just a few more things to enjoy about life, and I'd wish everyone could at least experience them if they wanted to, given a choice.

 

Suffice to say, reality isn't ideal. Still, if consenting adults can enjoy something I can't, more mower to them.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2021 2:32 PM Title: A Reconciliation

"She's smuggled out convicts"- Ah, I must've forgotten Cathy admitting this to Allie. That's pretty damning. It does kind of dash my old theory that the government is monitoring and studying SPAR sessions as a psychological social experiment if Cathy and likely other Chavaliers have a habit of smuggling out their victims to torture them some more. Brian Bentley should've been an exemption to this since the judicial system was bribed to get rid of him. Although if they do monitor sessions they knew Allie had a perfect track record of not breaking the rules and taking a convict home. In which case a  "Should we interfer sir?" "No, no. I want to see how far they get" plot could form. Powerful people aware of what's going on, or a system too powerful wielded by the corrupt and incompetent. I lean more and more towards the system is a powerful tool and no one competent is in charge of it. I am curious to see if Cathy learns of Brian's innocense or is convinced of it when he's regrown or still shrunken and if they meet again to see how they interact.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was a pretty important piece of info that Cathy so casually admitted. I like your theories as to the nature of the SP, and I hope you enjoy learning what I have in mind!

It's definitely interesting to think about what a reunion with Cathy would look like if Brian's innocence is revealed. A lot could happen if his innocence is revealed to the world, but I think it's fair to say that he would be owed a lot of apologies by a lot of people, including Cathy! I hope you enjoy where we go from here.

-Pluto

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