Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2021 3:10 PM Title: Consequences

"There's no conspiracy, it's not like that". Noo, not my speculations and machinations! Kind of annoyed by Elizabeth being schocked that Allsion and Ben didn't have a plan or course of action to clear his name. Lady by your own confession you took no steps in actually helping him. The fact he's alive is purely luck.

 

I think Brian's fofo when things got intimate with Allison at the end, speficially someone saying into his ear "You're so cute" is hinting that he might relapse into nightmares involving when he was raped in prison in the 2+ years he was there.

 

Curious to see what Elizabeth plans to do with a notebook of Brian recounting the events oof the night Osment died and the shame trial he went through. I think it likely she'll partner up with political and judicial allies, passing along the notes of "Brian Bentley's testimony" or "Brian Bentley's interrogation" to a media outlet to rekindle public interest. To be even more impactful she could record an actual video interview of Brian to leak to the media. If done with a masked interviewer interacting with him it would prove he's the real Brian since only convicted murders seem to be shrunk in this society. All police and court pictures, videos, documents were sealed, so either significant public protest or something like an up and coming state/federal prosecutor looking to advance their career by exposing judicial corruption could force the case and "evidence" back open.

 

This does mean though that he will have to be taken from Allison and hidden at some point since the government at least knows Allison was the last person to see him alive. I want to say this this duty falls to Elizabeth but i think she might get compromised as a contact with Brian at some point as well. Unless more characters get introduced in the story, this has the potential to bring Cathy back in as a surprise dark horse.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry to spoil your speculation! I'd gone back and forth on it a few times, but I ultimately felt like going full-conspiracy would broaden the scope of the story to an extent that I'm not comfortable with. It also would give me an easy out in solving problems, as a conspiracy with that much influence could practically do everything. Like, for example, if she was part of a group that had that much influence, then why couldn't they just access Brian's case files? Can't make things too easy for me!

But yeah, with that being said, Elizabeth still obviously has some power and influence. Now that she has the information, she's not gonna sit still. I hope you enjoy where the story goes from here! I really appreciate your continued reviews and detailed thoughts.

-Pluto

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2021 12:26 AM Title: Consequences

Oh you sneaky sausage! the continuation is even better than the original story! I expected elizabeths backstory and kind of expected allies reaction (and im sure once allie calms down theyll contact her again)

but boy oh boy! i absolutely LOVED the intensity and desire that got the better of Allie for a moment, that is of course while having the knowledge that she isn't going to hurt him, she just wanted to have fun like couples do ;) 

I cannot wait to see how Brian copes with the situation, especially if he ends up giving into desire as well.. and i definitely cannot wait till he becomes normal sized again, im expecting plenty of intimacy ^_^

Really looking forward to the next chapters!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm really glad you're enjoying the sequel even more than the original.

I'm glad you liked Allison's brief lapse in restraint! Of course, she would never intend to hurt him, she just wanted to have a little fun. After everything that happened that day, her love for Brian was at 500% capacity. Only so much she can take, you know?

I hope you enjoy how she continues to deal with her urges, as well as how Brian reacts to them! Thanks for your continued reviews.

-Pluto