Date: March 31 2021 8:17 PM Title: Revelations
I like that Brian's sister was really close with him emotionally. I hate the stereotype of of siblings not getting along.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reviews, and I'm glad you're enjoying the sequel so far! I agree with your first review, it's terrible to think about going through what Brian has gone through. I'm happy that he isn't able to confront me, since he'd probably beat me up for writing him such a difficult life.
I also know what you mean about Elizabeth! That's the trouble with fictional characters- they're fictional. But oh well, there are plenty of wonderful people in real life, too. We just have to find them.
Lastly, I agree with you about sibling relationships! There are plenty of bad sibling relationships on this site, so I wanted to do something a little different. I hope you continue to enjoy their dynamic in future chapters!
-Pluto
[Report This]Date: March 08 2021 12:50 AM Title: Revelations
I can't wait for the next chapter! That last bit of information has gotten my hopes up, even if it might cause future conflict. I feel like restoring Brian's size would benefit both Brian and Allie since Allison would actually get to express her affection for Brian without having to worry about how fragile he is. Brian would actually be able to return Allison's affection at a much more noticeable level (nothing beats being able to embrace your girlfriend tbh). Not to mention I feel like being full size would facilitate the reunion between Brian and his sister. I can only hope that Allison wasn't keeping anything from him on purpose because it would break my heart to watch my favorite couple have another lover's quarrel. However I'm sure that whatever it is that you have planned will be great! As always, you have my full attention!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the reveal, as well as the possibilities for the future that it opens up. I just uploaded the next chapter, so I hope you enjoy it! Thanks again for reading.
-Pluto
Date: March 07 2021 4:58 AM Title: Revelations
"The shrinking is permanent" "No it isn't". Called it! So either Professor Elizabeth has a deep knowledge of the system or Allison is about to cause a crisis of faith in Brian over keeping him in the dark about restoring him. I wonder if Elizabeth's plan is to smuggle Brian back to a SPAR facility or if she knows about other shrinking chambers at research labs or government divisions.
Author's Response:
You certainly did! Yeah, there are a lot of ways in which this knowledge could be influencing Elizabeth's future plans. I hope you enjoy finding out what happens!
-Pluto
Date: March 06 2021 11:18 PM Title: Revelations
Oh what a brilliant revelation!!! i have to say i grinned when i read the last line! I can't wait to see what may happen in the future under those potential "different" circumstances! brian and allies relationship may indeed go off the charts!
Great writing as always! thank you for this continuation!
Author's Response:
It's my pleasure, I'm glad you enjoyed this development! Your reviews certainly influenced the decision, so I hope you enjoy the way it affects the rest of the story!
-Pluto