Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2021 3:02 PM Title: The Big Reveal

Wow, I'm surprised you started on the sequel so soon. I can't help but feel like Elizabeth almost revealed to Brian and us that shrinking isn't permanent anymore or never was and that Brian can be restored if his name is cleared with a certain well placed quip:““Nonsense, honey,” Elizabeth responded dismissively. “You’re still you, even if you’re small. And besides, it’s not like the shrinking is-” “Here we go,” Allison interrupted." 

I still can't shake the feeling that Professor Dawson knows more about the world and is moving pieces behind the scenes. If it's true that shrinking can be reversed how would she know? In her mental musings Allison believes shrinking to be irreversable and it seems odd if an ex-Chevalier wouldn't hear about it in work rumors or gossip. I could just be over-reading into the good professor's attempts at smoothing out Brian's fear and resentment. I think there's a very good chance Brian will be forced into staying alone with Elizabeth if they catch wind of authorities investigating Alison on a tip from Cathy or general government monitoring. A chance to see if there's more to her nature then pure Samaritan goodness when left alone with Brian.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! I'm pretty surprised myself. I hope you find it interesting, as I really appreciate your detailed thoughts!

I think you'll find that there's a lot of mystery and deception surrounding the SP. I hope you'll like how it ends up affecting Allison and Brian, as well as finding out if Elizabeth has anything to do with it!

-Pluto