Date: March 30 2021 4:39 AM Title: Bitter Rivalry
I have been seriously enjoying this story so far. I love it!
I am leaving this review to say that I loved this chapter, and I'm kinda hope that Emily gets her happy ending.
Like, I hope that Angie and Faith are able to escape, but I also think that Emily's submission and devotion to Duncan is really cute (in a totally fucked-up way), and I want her to be able to have her twisted happily ever after with him.
I also think that Duncan is obviously awful, and basically I don't think he deserves a girl like Emily. However, this chapter had some really interesting developments that I liked. Given that fact that he's never given up Emily and the fact that he actually trusts her enough to grow her to her normal size and make love to her tells me that there might be more to how he sees Emily than meets the eye. So part of me hopes that Emily's devotion might help him be a little better, at least to her.
I don't know. I guess I just really hope that Emily gets what she wants in the end, which obviously includes Duncan having his power.
I guess we'll see lol. Just had to put it out there!
In any case, I still think that you're a fantastic writer! Keep it up! ^^
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was really happy with how this chapter turned out. I got to flesh out a few characters who up to this point really hadn't gotten much of a day in the sun. Since next chapter is going to start putting the pieces of the puzzle together that I've been putting in place, I wanted this one to be more character-driven. I'm glad that this decision has been so well-received!
As for where these characters end up, that's going to be a bit of a spoiler, so I won't get too into it, but I hope you'll like how this all pans out in the end. I've had most of this story planned since Chapter 1, so seeing the progress I've made thirteen chapters later has been a heck of a ride.