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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 1:16 PM Title: Part 2

The idea is good, but most importantly you've done a GREAT job with the details (the harness, the descriptions etc); luckily closetslave1 and vegetaboy made thoughtful critiques so I can get away simply saying that I love this story ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, el_rooto!  I am very glad you are liking it!  And even more gladdened that you took the time to express it!

Reviews are the meat and bread for us writers!

Thanks again!

Reviewer: psychotropic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 1:23 AM Title: Part 2

I absolutely love this second chapter with the inshoe stuff! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Haha!  Glad you're enjoying it!  There's more coming, so stay tuned! :D

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