[Report This]Date: April 01 2021 12:59 PM Title: Part 3
Incredibly detailed thought process of being under feet, I love it!
[Report This]Date: February 18 2021 7:04 PM Title: Part 1
Great work so far! I've always love the idea of no turning back once you realize how painful it is, especially being "forgotten" in a shoe for an entire day, can't wait to see more updates
Date: February 15 2021 12:05 AM Title: Part 3
Another great chapter F00tprint, and a surprise one at that as I was resigned to a wait for the end of the month. Such a detailed account though that really conjures up the hopelessness of the shrunken mans situation, and I love the hidden aspect of it all as well. As the client is a submissive though, I half expected the dominatrix to use the fate of her little shoe prisoner as a means to torment the new guy. You know, kind of like a 'I have a man imprisoned in my shoe right now, and if you don't behave, you'll go in the other one' scenario.
"Oh, you don't believe me? Then take a look, worm"... ;-)
Thrilling...
Author's Response:
LOL! I hadn't thought of that! But heh, also, for a reason.
I've never been a fan of the quick-shrink-gadget. Raygun, pull trigger, guy shrinks. In my love of realism (if a less-than-a-foot-sized-person CAN be realistic, as you so aptly pointed out!), I look at the technology as something that has to be administered under special circumstances and with monitored care. A few weeks in a womb tank, for instance, keeping the subject sustained and protected while the tech rewrites their genetic code for the new size. This is what happened to our victim. Which, I had plans to describe to some small degree further on in the story. I was planning to have one of the clients get curious, and start asking question when our hero was revealed. But heh, since you got curious, I thought I'd explain it here. ;)
Glad you're still enjoying the story! Stay tuned! There's more coming!
On the note of this installment, I got another snow day, and decided to use it to do some writing. And it's still winter, so you never know!
Cheers! :D
[Report This]Date: February 14 2021 4:58 PM Title: Part 1
I love this story. I'm not much into "footwear" but the whole relationship between him "whining" and the prodomme "just doing her business" is making me grow interested about the nature of the following chapters.
Date: February 08 2021 11:28 PM Title: Part 1
Yes, that makes perfect sense, F00tprint. Preferences aside I think that realism trumps it. Well, as much as being shrunk and becoming pretty much invulnerable can be real of course, but I get your POV. You clearly are thinking deeply on the details of this story and I'm really happy to see you go wherever you feel is best in future instalments. I'm sure that whatever you come up with will be as thrilling as the previous chapters are, and I really like where you're going with the curious client hearing something.
Will he be shocked and put off, will he be casually dismissive, or will he be wanting her to show him more? Indeed, by the very nature of their likely clandestine arrangement, will our dominatrix perhaps find that she is enjoying having a little foot freak beneath her feet, and then choose to keep him and not allow him to leave?
So many ways this story can pan out...
Author's Response:
Yep, so many ways it can, indeed. ;)
But it's probably going to be a few weeks, or maybe a little longer, before I'll be able to get out my next installment. I had a snowed-in weekend, which gave me ample time to write and refine these two first chapters. But the roads are clear again, so I'm back to driving again (yeah, trucker inRL if you can believe it!), so unless I get snowed in again, I'll probably only have the ends of the months to work on my story.
That said, if you haven't already, you might give Part 2 another read. I just did a little tweaking to it, added some description here and there, but the things I did gave a it little more umph and a little more impact.
Either way, once again, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And thank you very much for dropping me your reviews. Those are always appreciated.
Date: February 08 2021 1:16 PM Title: Part 2
The idea is good, but most importantly you've done a GREAT job with the details (the harness, the descriptions etc); luckily closetslave1 and vegetaboy made thoughtful critiques so I can get away simply saying that I love this story ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, el_rooto! I am very glad you are liking it! And even more gladdened that you took the time to express it!
Reviews are the meat and bread for us writers!
Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2021 1:23 AM Title: Part 2
I absolutely love this second chapter with the inshoe stuff! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Haha! Glad you're enjoying it! There's more coming, so stay tuned! :D
Date: February 08 2021 12:24 AM Title: Part 1
Yes! So glad you decided to add to this story. I really loved this chapter, the way you describe his hopelessness. For me it's all about the nonchalant and uncaring detachment being shown by the dominatrix and how she's just doing her thing and ignoring him to the point that any reminder of his presense is simply an annoyance to her.
I have to admit that I'm not particularly a sneaker and sock fan, much preferring high heeled shoes and stockings, but this story and the way you describe it all is so exciting, and I guess the casual daily footwear adds to the scene.
Thank you so much. Can't wait for more...
Author's Response:
Oh, I thought about putting him in a high heel, either in her bare feet or with stockings. I kept running into a delimma with the thought, however! His being against the bottom of her foot, would make the high heel too tight for her, and therefore too uncomfortable for her to wear! And I want my dominatrix to be a thinking woman, not just a robot of a character that I flub things for, just to make thing work. High heels have stiff insoles and very little room to spare inside, they supposed to fit the woman's foot snugly so there's no wobbling and sliding of it as she walks, and stuff like that. The possibility of twisted ankles and all like that, you know!
So, I thought "old sneaker". It might be a bit unsighly for a woman in her profession, but it could work. The sneaker might be a little tight as the high heel would be, but it would be a lot less uncomfortable for our dominatrix to wear. Also, she has the confidence to pull it off. One of her customers might remark on it, but she might say in response, "Are you here to get whipped? Or to stare at my feet?"
In future installments, I am thinking about having a customer get curious about it. "Do you hear that?" he might say. "There it goes again! It sounds like it is coming from in this room!"
And... we'll see where that goes! :D
Glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: February 07 2021 12:40 AM Title: Part 1
Wow, what an awesome story. I really loved her cold detachment and casual manner. I'm hoping that you'll continue this one as it'd be great to read about how she ignores her 'Shoe' whilst with her clients. Perhaps they might even get off on it.
Many thanks for posting...
Author's Response:
Heh, I have thought about expanding on it. So who knows! Maybe one day soon!
[Report This]Date: February 05 2021 9:03 AM Title: Part 1
I loved this, a great and sexy story.
You described his time under her feet so well, and I loved her attitude towards him and her treatment of him.
But the formatting really does take distract and make it hard to read.
I have copied and pasted from google docs, and I have been able to retrain the formatting. So maybe look into that? As this is a great story, but the formatting really made it tough at times.
Author's Response:
Alrighty. Fixed the formatting. Hopefully it is easier to read now. :-)