Reviews For Property of Lily
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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2021 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 8: The shop

Yes, I have to agree with Dawger2 - another great chapter!


And Tso9234 has it right: the noncon portions of this story make it all the better.


 



Author's Response:

Thank you! -jsm109

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2021 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 8: The shop

What an excellent chapter! There's not much andy action but just those 2 girls talking what to do with John makes this chapter so hot.

I was wondering if Lily would reveal to Margot that John is actually her brother. And I literally screamed inside my head when she rill did reveal it to her. That is like my most favorite part of this chapter.

I really love how you wrote Margot's character here. She's now like my 2nd best girl in this story

Man, I wish Margot has a brother too. I would love to see her to rape her tiny brother as well with all the toys she possess

The branding part scares me though but I still find it hot knowing that Lily now actually owns her brother. I would love to see her brother to be broken inside

Love this chapter guys. Thanks again. Really can't wait for the next

 

 



Author's Response:

Sounds like a spin-off series to me. Like yougts recommended, go for it! -jsm109

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2021 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: The shop

amazing story!please add more ass



Author's Response:

Well all those toys certainly have to serve a purpose, eh? ;) -jsm109

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2021 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: The shop

So many different preferences covered here, well done! I love all the attention to detail and descriptions.

 

I personally can't wait for movie night. Maybe she'll eat more than jusr popcorn to make it worse for him?



Author's Response:

Funny, that's not in our outline despite the foreshadowing. I'm thinking we change that though. I'm personally not a fan of hints that never pan out. Thank for the reminder! -jsm109

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