Date: March 07 2021 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 8: The shop
Yes, I have to agree with Dawger2 - another great chapter!
And Tso9234 has it right: the noncon portions of this story make it all the better.
Author's Response:
Thank you! -jsm109
Date: March 05 2021 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 8: The shop
What an excellent chapter! There's not much andy action but just those 2 girls talking what to do with John makes this chapter so hot.
I was wondering if Lily would reveal to Margot that John is actually her brother. And I literally screamed inside my head when she rill did reveal it to her. That is like my most favorite part of this chapter.
I really love how you wrote Margot's character here. She's now like my 2nd best girl in this story
Man, I wish Margot has a brother too. I would love to see her to rape her tiny brother as well with all the toys she possess
The branding part scares me though but I still find it hot knowing that Lily now actually owns her brother. I would love to see her brother to be broken inside
Love this chapter guys. Thanks again. Really can't wait for the next
Author's Response:
Sounds like a spin-off series to me. Like yougts recommended, go for it! -jsm109
Date: March 05 2021 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: The shop
amazing story!please add more ass
Author's Response:
Well all those toys certainly have to serve a purpose, eh? ;) -jsm109
Date: March 05 2021 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: The shop
So many different preferences covered here, well done! I love all the attention to detail and descriptions.
I personally can't wait for movie night. Maybe she'll eat more than jusr popcorn to make it worse for him?
Author's Response:
Funny, that's not in our outline despite the foreshadowing. I'm thinking we change that though. I'm personally not a fan of hints that never pan out. Thank for the reminder! -jsm109