Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2021 2:29 AM Title: Part 3

Ok, this chapter fills in a gap in size change now that you posted it in correct order.

Love the way Aurora uses him as her sextoy even though he is in physical size too smalle to satisfy her; yet his small size all the more stimulating to her.

If you would not mind, I'd like to go back to a paragraph from Chapter 2:  "And I could feel it. Every so slowly, his skin sliding across mine. Where it stuck, the tension would build up, and then it would slide all at once, a fraction of an inch. With every second, every rise and fall of my chest, I felt like I was covering more and more of him."

That is such an important and erotic description of the shrinking process that I must commend you for it.  What a wonderful, detailed, and beautiful decription of someone shrinking while against somebody else.  BRAVO!!!!!  Well done and exceptionally well written.

I notice very few reviews for your story.  This is a shame.  You have one of the best stories going.

If I were to offer any suggestion, even though you seperate present recollections from past memories by noting * paragraphs; you may want to consider a different font / italizied used to disguinguish present from past more difinitively. 

Can't wait for Chapter 5!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2021 3:29 AM Title: Part 3

I really like how you combine the tantalizing build up with Aurora slowly regaining her memories of the previous night's events.

You have a very gratifying writing style.  You keep the subject matter going, not bogged down on endless descriptions; yet you tell enough for the reader to get a vivid image of what is transpiring.

Side note.  Question: What are the worst 8 words to ever hear after a night of partying?  Answer: "Do you remember what you did last night?"

Author's Response:

That's great! It's good to know that the story came out sounding the way I wanted. This story was a weird for me in many ways, so I honestly had no idea how it was going to fare.