[Report This]Date: May 01 2021 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
Typo: "You don't my world anymore?"
I'm getting Star Trek VOY 2x23 "The Thaw" vibes from the person who looks like Vanessa. Quoting the transcript (http://www.chakoteya.net/Voyager/219.htm):
KOHL WOMAN: The system was designed to be adaptive, to observe and respond to our thoughts, and adjust the environment to our wishes.
TORRES: Who wished him up?
VIORSA: It happened over months without our even realising it. All of us had fears about survival, recovery. We never anticipated the computer would manifest those fears into him.
Too early for me to guess who has the giantess fetish (if any) though.
Author's Response:
Thank you for chatching my typos! You wouldn't belive how many hours of editing I've put into this whole thing and still things slip through the cracks. I'm never writing a story this long again, it's been a headache!