Date: January 12 2021 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story had a very interesting premise and was well executed. I love how he came to realize his mistakes, and how it ended with such a twist. My only criticism would be I wish the story to be a bit longer with him adventuring the more futuristic world he placed himself in. Overall very good story!
Thanks for the review! The story was written for a short story series, so I didn't want to make it too long, but I guess it could be expanded sometime in the future.
Date: January 12 2021 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Now that was a great read! From the shock and refusal to accept the reality of his bad life choices to the final twist of him living in a simulation.
Thanks! I was going for a Twilight Zone-style twist at the end.
Date: January 12 2021 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this premise.
The idea of a man travelling to a future ruled over by a giantess/matriarchal society is fantastic, and you pulled it off so well.
I read a somewhat similar story where a guy and his ex (who was a bitch) was frozen and woke up in a utopian society where women ruled, and they thought he was abusive to his ex so they shrunk him. (sadly that was not continued, or has not been at this time)
But I love the idea of a man out of time, shrunken down and unable to interact or gain any social or physical power over the ruling class of giants.
A really well done story here, would love it if you returned to it in another story up the track.
Thank you for the review! I don't plan on writing a sequel to this story, but I might do another type of story about a man ending up in a society of giant women someday.