[Report This]Date: January 15 2021 10:15 AM Title: I'm Not Some Fucking Criminal
Wow, that was clever!
The ending was great! It makes sense and was a smart way to keep Jack in a cell.
I also love how the new woman didn't believe Jack and didn't even bother to double check. You know she heard that story before, haha!
Rebecca was great in this chapter. I admit, it was surprising to see her drunk which is different from her professional and sexy behavior that we are used to seeing. Well, I guess since we see Rebecca more often now, there will be more things we will learn about her.
It's also interesting how she stated that she has "been waiting for this" for a week. I assumed she had a sex toy every day, but I guess not. However, we know she does it often since her coworker knows all about it.
Hmm, I wonder if Jack will get a female cellmate. That could be fun. Maybe someone takes advantage of Jack and then this new woman tries to save him, but instead she also uses him as a sex toy. (Alright, I think I'm getting carried away. Lol.)
I still want to see Rebecca interact with Jack when she is not drunk. I wonder if she will even remember him. Well, I guess she would since he was sleeping in her office did a day. Heck, when she wakes up, I bet she will wonder where did he go.
Poor Jack is stuck in this jail and is going to be treated like a prisoner. Only Sarah and Rebecca know he is innocent but I don't think he wants their help. I like how things are shaping up.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm honored that you put so much thought into what might happen in the future, even more than me haha. Just keep in mind everything I said in the story's introduction