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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2021 7:26 AM Title: Squirming Only Makes it Better

Whoa!

This makes so much sense! I can't believe I didn't connect the dots earlier. You are right, this is exactly where your original story ended with Sarah being arrested!

I love how you answered my questions from your other story. I remember asking about what happnened to that guy that was in Sarah's panties and now I know! This is incredible. I had no idea that he would be the focus of this story, and that makes it much more exciting for me!

Besides Sarah, Officer Rebecca was my second favorite character simply because of how sexual she was and not to mention that she has authority to do what she wants. It's a spicy combination that I love. We barely saw much with Rebecca that perhaps she might be my favorite character if you decide to use her a lot in this story. 

I reread the Matt Dexter story's ending again and I noticed that Rebecca also has Josh Mcleave in her possession as well at this time. Then in the post-credit scene, she took Sarah's cell mate, but I guess that happens later since Sarah is being processed now. 

So now I wonder who ends up in Officer Rebecca's crotch for the most part. Will it be Josh or Jack? I expect it to be Jack since this is his story, but I wouldnt be surprised if Josh ends up there. Hmm, then again. Jack isn't being arrested, Rebecca is just "taking care" of him. And she likes him. So maybe she will shove Josh up her ass for being a criminal while she keeps Jack as her sex toy. 

I'm just imagining things now, but it looks very promising. Jack is one lucky guy to go from Sarah to Officer Rebecca. I wish I was him. 

This is easily my favorite chapter so far and I can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Ay, I'm glad it makes more sense. And yes, I guess Jack is a very lucky guy for being in this situation. Or very unlucky, depends how you see it. Thanks for reading!

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