Date: January 19 2021 11:09 AM Title: Never a Conversationalist
I love this chapter!
It reminds me of the time when Jack first entered the school. There were giantesses and little guys and there's also a guy who is "friends" with the Queen. Very similar systems which quickly helps me understand that this jail is basically the school, but worse.
Now we know Seb's role in this jail. Serve the popular giantess and she won't let others abuse you. Not a bad trade considering the circumstances. I doubt Jack will gain that trust in time considering this story will end soon.
One detail I liked was the recap of Jack's experiences in his dream. It just reminded me of all the sexy moments in this story. What a ride! It honestly doesn't sound that bad to someone as perverted as me. Haha!
Another detail I love was when Seb and Jack were witnessing all the ways that the giantesses were messing with the tiny guys. I mean, that spoon idea was sexy! I have read so many giantess stories and that's a new one for me. I love ideas like that.
I don't know what to think of Nicole. Since the story is ending soon, I'm not sure there is enough time for me to like her. I like Sarah and Rebecca, mostly because I've seen them enough to appreciate them. But Nicole is new, so we shall see.
Seb is interesting. He kinda reminds me of Matt Dexter with his calm demeaneor. I mean, he casually walks up to Nicole which I assume is rare for a tiny to approach a giantess. Only Matt Dexter was brave enough to do something like this before, so it's interesting to see Seb do this as well. Although, Matt didn't need to worship his queen to gain her respect, he just talked to her while Seb is literally pleasing Nicole sexually for protection.
You mention that the story will abruptly end soon which makes me sad, but I'm glad I was able to enjoy the story so far. I'm going to assume the story will end in the next chapter or maybe the one after.
I have no idea how it will end. My guess is that Jack is bailed out, but it's by a giantess. I don't think it will be Sarah because in the epilogue of your other story, Michael has a plan to set her free, so I think it's too soon for Sarah to free Jack. Also, Sarah just wants a sex toy and Michael professed his love to Sarah so there's no need for Sarah to rescue Jack. The only other solution is Rebecca..... but I also doubt that. Hmm, actually I think the other police woman that "rescued" Jack from Rebecca will be his savior. I think she will finally realize she made a mistake and take him out or something. Yeah, that's my prediction.
Thanks so much for your in depth review. Yeah, I didn't really know what to do with Seb, and he's one of the many characters that I didn't know where to take. I've tried to make Nicole as a basically worse version of Anna, but I don't know if it worked out. Oh well, as long as you enjoyed it.
Date: January 18 2021 8:31 PM Title: Shit Talking Virgin Loser
Another awesome update. I realize we're coming to the end of it though. Are you planning on doing a full-blown sequel you alluded to in the intro to this story? I was a huge fan of the first one and this one's great too of course.
Yes I plan to write a sequel, but I am almost certain it's going to take a long while. I want to make sure it's good, and that takes time. Thanks for the support!
Date: January 16 2021 9:44 AM Title: I Don't Belong Here
While not the most exciting chapter, we did learn a lot about this prison.
It's interesting to learn about the different sections with different sizes. So for these tiny guys, their cells may be a safe area, but the common areas are very risky. They could hide in their cells, but eventually they gotta eat.
Glad to see you don't use the stereotypical cell mate that is always someone rude. You make a good point about movies using that trope way too often.
I really like how Sebastian explained how many tiny guys experience the same fate as Jack. It really expands my mind and shows how messed up this system is. (Not that I'm complaining lol).
Looking forward to see what's next! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Yes, the system is very very messed up. Your reviews are actually inspiring me to incorporate Jack's story into the bigger narrative that I am thinking of, so thank you. First, I will have to get Matt involved
Date: January 15 2021 10:15 AM Title: I'm Not Some Fucking Criminal
Wow, that was clever!
The ending was great! It makes sense and was a smart way to keep Jack in a cell.
I also love how the new woman didn't believe Jack and didn't even bother to double check. You know she heard that story before, haha!
Rebecca was great in this chapter. I admit, it was surprising to see her drunk which is different from her professional and sexy behavior that we are used to seeing. Well, I guess since we see Rebecca more often now, there will be more things we will learn about her.
It's also interesting how she stated that she has "been waiting for this" for a week. I assumed she had a sex toy every day, but I guess not. However, we know she does it often since her coworker knows all about it.
Hmm, I wonder if Jack will get a female cellmate. That could be fun. Maybe someone takes advantage of Jack and then this new woman tries to save him, but instead she also uses him as a sex toy. (Alright, I think I'm getting carried away. Lol.)
I still want to see Rebecca interact with Jack when she is not drunk. I wonder if she will even remember him. Well, I guess she would since he was sleeping in her office did a day. Heck, when she wakes up, I bet she will wonder where did he go.
Poor Jack is stuck in this jail and is going to be treated like a prisoner. Only Sarah and Rebecca know he is innocent but I don't think he wants their help. I like how things are shaping up.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for the review! I'm honored that you put so much thought into what might happen in the future, even more than me haha. Just keep in mind everything I said in the story's introduction
Date: January 14 2021 4:25 PM Title: Shit Talking Virgin Loser
I lovr your stories and can't wait for more. Welcome back and my only critique is I wish your gave us more information on the pov of being inside the panties or pussy. Keep up the great work
Thanks so much! I must say I'm not the best at describing such pov, but I promise to try my best
Date: January 13 2021 7:26 AM Title: Squirming Only Makes it Better
This makes so much sense! I can't believe I didn't connect the dots earlier. You are right, this is exactly where your original story ended with Sarah being arrested!
I love how you answered my questions from your other story. I remember asking about what happnened to that guy that was in Sarah's panties and now I know! This is incredible. I had no idea that he would be the focus of this story, and that makes it much more exciting for me!
Besides Sarah, Officer Rebecca was my second favorite character simply because of how sexual she was and not to mention that she has authority to do what she wants. It's a spicy combination that I love. We barely saw much with Rebecca that perhaps she might be my favorite character if you decide to use her a lot in this story.
I reread the Matt Dexter story's ending again and I noticed that Rebecca also has Josh Mcleave in her possession as well at this time. Then in the post-credit scene, she took Sarah's cell mate, but I guess that happens later since Sarah is being processed now.
So now I wonder who ends up in Officer Rebecca's crotch for the most part. Will it be Josh or Jack? I expect it to be Jack since this is his story, but I wouldnt be surprised if Josh ends up there. Hmm, then again. Jack isn't being arrested, Rebecca is just "taking care" of him. And she likes him. So maybe she will shove Josh up her ass for being a criminal while she keeps Jack as her sex toy.
I'm just imagining things now, but it looks very promising. Jack is one lucky guy to go from Sarah to Officer Rebecca. I wish I was him.
This is easily my favorite chapter so far and I can't wait for the next one!
Ay, I'm glad it makes more sense. And yes, I guess Jack is a very lucky guy for being in this situation. Or very unlucky, depends how you see it. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 12 2021 6:17 AM Title: Sarah X Michael
The fact that Sarah seems to be a main character in this story brings a smile to my face. I always loved it when she took advantage of the tiny guys around her.
Also, it's crazy to see Michael there. Clearly he has been through some stuff. This makes me wonder. Does this take place before or after the events of the Matt Dexter story? Because you mentioned Josh Cleaves being a bully which sounds like it's was before Matt Dexter shows up and now we see Michael afraid of Sarah which happens during or maybe after Matt Dexter's story happened.
Once small detail I really enjoy is when Jack watches the students around him and sees giantess girls having fun with little guys. I mean, that cheerleader scene was amazing!
Looks like this next day is going to be fun. I can't wait for the next chapter!
To answer your question, the current scenes are taking place DURING Matt Dexter's story. If you pay attention, you can see that some scenes are very similar, even identical, to scenes from the other story.
And yes, I especially enjoyed writing the cheerleader scene as well.
Date: January 11 2021 8:50 PM Title: Shit Talking Virgin Loser
Welcome back Bob!
Glad to see another story from you.
Also, I think it's funny how you lowered my expectations with the chapter intro and suddenly this chapter gets immediately interesting with the inclusion of Sarah. I assume this is the same Sarah from the Matt Dexter story, right?
You mention all these things about this story such as plot, characters and worldbuilding, but nothing about sex. So I thought there wasn't going to be anything intimate. Well, after reading this first chapter, I'm glad I was wrong. Haha.
What a great start and I miss this Chesnut school. And I also miss Sarah.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thank you! Yes, this is the same Sarah, which will probably become more obvious in the future chapters. One of the things I tried in this story was to go immediately into the graphic scenes, and while that did not pan out in the long run, it made for a hell of a short story.